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She was his little girl and no matter where they went the room was filled with the sound of her laughter Precious stars of heaven dipped like diamonds for her for she was the most beautiful angel on earth Then one day she got very sick and had to fly away; He was left with the memory of their last firm embrace day after day, night after night, he hoped for her return one night he had a dream that she spoke inside his ear "release me dad, " she breathed to a falling manly tear His heart went Pop! and then, the rhythm re-appeared. May 6, 2021

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Date: 5/13/2021 10:22:00 PM
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Date: 5/13/2021 10:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for participating and sharing your inspirational poem, congrats on your placement, Mystic Rose! ‘His heart went Pop! and then, the rhythm re-appeared’
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Date: 5/14/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thank you dear Seeker, I'm honored to be on your winners list, :)
Date: 5/7/2021 9:59:00 AM
Sweet...We all must let go...Love can't be must be free.
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Date: 5/6/2021 10:52:00 PM
Yes truly beautiful, Vie....
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Date: 5/6/2021 6:09:00 PM
very moving, Mystic ~
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