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Embodying The Light

Each day seems to be an endless delight. Like rains of monsoon fullness flow and flood Rainbows of optimism enchant my sight. A world of hope is seen in each new bud. There's an unknown stir in my inmost soul. A sunbeam silently enters my shrine. A weird whirl curls and furls my hidden goal. Like gold in the sun, my heart and mind shine. New blood of change flows through new flesh and veins. Physique and psyche seem to gain new birth. The environs are in mirth, freed of pains. As grace of the divine pervades the earth

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Date: 2/13/2025 8:29:00 AM
Just enjoyed your write, Embodying the Light, especially how you worded your second stanza. I also like "physique and psyche" to counter with the old cliche body and mind/soul. Very nice, I congratulate your talent and skill with words.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/13/2025 10:01:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/10/2025 2:11:00 PM
Your poem has a beautiful, uplifting tone, with a strong sense of renewal and optimism. The imagery is vibrant—rainbows, sunbeams, gold, and flowing water all evoke a sense of transformation and enlightenment. Your rhyme scheme is consistent, giving your poem a lyrical quality that enhances its dreamy, almost spiritual feel.
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Date: 2/10/2025 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me objective feedback. May God Bless You!

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