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Written on Janurary 20, 2025

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Line of inquiry: truth imbibed awaits assimilation we feel it in our bones in time dissolved meditation ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the forest’s trees, though asleep, at twilight they silently seek the stars who softly weep glorious oaks with their gentle leaves so bright laugh and tell tales of the mountains so steep in the forest I glimpse a fanciful tune written by the moss, the pines and the stones hesitant winds lift the birds as they croon against lazy shadows the river condones at the edge of the world, where the pines sigh there is a wonder unheard – still that abides flying through the night, across a black sky glad to know the grace that only love provides midst the wildflowers, dancing in the fields grows a melody so clear it cheers the soul autumn’s breath defies the shower who yields gifting forest’s captive with certain parole in the light of still, unmoving musings soars the ancient belief of those lost in praise when the night falls, hearts collect their losings glowing on the night is love that never strays

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Date: 2/13/2025 2:24:00 AM
"stars who softly weep", "fanciful tune written by the moss", "the pines sigh" - Wow! Highly poetic. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/5/2025 6:37:00 AM
great personification of nature whose growth is so dependent on the light around them. Being a musician I was drawn to the references to songs from the moss, winds and wildflowers. Love the weeping, sighing, dancing, musing, even the defiance that proceeds from the light within them. A personal congrats (early) on your beautiful piece
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