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Embers of Time

Spring gave birth to blooms of youth That grew with each drop of rain Bringing joy to sunshine's truth And basking in its warm refrain Youthful days flew by on summer breeze Energized by flames of the sun Blue skies smiled down on the trees And clouds gathered round for fun Then youth gave way to those autumn years As the flames of the sun grew weak Our hair, like the leaves, soon disappeared As we slipped from youth's sunny peak Then winter brought the twilight years And we shivered in its frosty clime Some trees fell from wear and tear Their final passage, through the embers of time ----

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Date: 7/12/2016 11:24:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:23:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Joseph! Congrats on your placement in the contest!
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:28:00 AM
Joseph , Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda
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Date: 6/10/2015 4:03:00 PM
well done on the great placement Joseph, a bit of shivery frost and falling trees, never did any harm I suppose..' as long as you don't stand under them..'
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:45:00 AM
Joseph. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 6/9/2015 7:31:00 AM
Hi, Joseph, I enjoyed reading your poem about the passing of time. And congratulations for your contest win. Blessings, Darlene
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:50:00 AM
you portrayed each season so beautifully Joseph many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:20:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my friend. Superb write.. A7...
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Date: 6/8/2015 8:54:00 PM
An excellent write, Joseph! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/8/2015 4:43:00 PM
you enchant with this tasteful write on aging gracefully Joseph congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 6/8/2015 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Shadow...glad to bring some of those old poems back again...hugs
Date: 5/23/2014 9:49:00 PM
Big congrats on the win!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:47:00 PM
wonderful read on life's cycles ; much enjoyed,joseph.. applause and huggs
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Date: 5/21/2014 5:21:00 AM
first and second stanza are my favorites.. :) seasonal embers of time.. that's how i see this.. :) , CONGRATULATIONS on the victory.. :D!, GBU olive.. :)
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:33:00 PM
Joseph, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2014 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Joseph
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Date: 5/19/2014 10:21:00 PM
Wonderful write Joseph and so is the merited huge win ! congrats !
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:30:00 PM
Joseph, a wonderful read. I am still basking in its mesmerizing beauty!
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Joseph May
Date: 4/22/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thank you for those kind words Ndaba
Date: 4/22/2014 12:28:00 PM
Joseph, a wonderful read. I am still basking its mesmerizing beauty!
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Date: 4/21/2014 6:16:00 PM
JOseph, sometimes I think you and I are on the same wave length a lot. If I were writing this poem, I'd have taken a similar view, going season by season as you did. Hmmm, If I ever try this contest, wonder what I can do??
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