Embers Of Night

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Joseph May's Alphabeth Soup Poetry Contest... 20Jan 25

Afterglow...Burnt Candles Dissolve Embers, Fondled Groans Heave Into Joyful Kindling... Lush Moon's Nightscape Offers Pleasure-- Quiet Ripples Sighing, Trickling Under Velvet Whispers... X-axis Yielding Zones.

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Lyric Man

Date: 5/17/2025 5:17:00 AM

Nette.. My favorite flavor in this sensual drink is how you mixed it.. intimacy to warmth, love’s tension to quietness. This goes down so beautifully (I’d love to make it a double).

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/24/2025 4:45:00 PM

Nette, candles make me think of joy and light. Sounds like there's company all around and the scene seems very pleasant. Smiles!!

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2025 6:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely penned

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/2/2025 11:03:00 PM

x-axis! ha, dear. lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/2/2025 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely ABC write. Have a blessed day with your win....................

Ink Empress

Date: 1/22/2025 10:41:00 AM

Love your abc, so beautifully woven and delivered, in such a way that makes me close my eyes and visualize the imagery youv painted in such a stunning and creative manner ! Best wishes dear nette, sending you light always

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2025 10:15:00 PM

I found this contest so challenging. I had almost given up. Then some ideas came into mind. After reading yours, more ideas come into me. But I fail to connect them. Well done! All the best, dear Nette.

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/19/2025 7:00:00 PM

well done Nette, you woven your words into a night of passion

Paige Hind

Date: 1/19/2025 5:48:00 PM

Simply beautiful - the end is amazing, too