Embers Of Night

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Joseph May's Alphabeth Soup Poetry Contest... 20Jan 25

Afterglow...Burnt Candles 
Dissolve Embers,
Fondled Groans Heave 
Into Joyful Kindling...
Lush Moon's Nightscape Offers
Pleasure-- Quiet Ripples Sighing,  Trickling 
Under Velvet Whispers...
X-axis Yielding Zones.

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Date: 5/17/2025 5:17:00 AM
Nette.. My favorite flavor in this sensual drink is how you mixed it.. intimacy to warmth, love’s tension to quietness. This goes down so beautifully (I’d love to make it a double).
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Date: 2/24/2025 4:45:00 PM
Nette, candles make me think of joy and light. Sounds like there's company all around and the scene seems very pleasant. Smiles!!
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Date: 2/4/2025 6:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely penned
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Date: 2/2/2025 11:03:00 PM
x-axis! ha, dear. lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 2/2/2025 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely ABC write. Have a blessed day with your win....................
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Date: 1/22/2025 10:41:00 AM
Love your abc, so beautifully woven and delivered, in such a way that makes me close my eyes and visualize the imagery youv painted in such a stunning and creative manner ! Best wishes dear nette, sending you light always
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Date: 1/19/2025 10:15:00 PM
I found this contest so challenging. I had almost given up. Then some ideas came into mind. After reading yours, more ideas come into me. But I fail to connect them. Well done! All the best, dear Nette.
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Date: 1/19/2025 7:00:00 PM
well done Nette, you woven your words into a night of passion
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Date: 1/19/2025 5:48:00 PM
Simply beautiful - the end is amazing, too
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