Embers Of Night


Afterglow...Burnt Candles 
Dissolve Embers,
Fondled Groans Heave 
Into Joyful Kindling...
Lush Moon's Nightscape Offers
Pleasure-- Quiet Ripples Sighing,  Trickling 
Under Velvet Whispers...
X-axis Yielding Zones.

nightpassionabc

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Lyric Man

May 17, 2025 at 5:17 AM

Nette.. My favorite flavor in this sensual drink is how you mixed it.. intimacy to warmth, love’s tension to quietness. This goes down so beautifully (I’d love to make it a double).

Duke Beaufort

February 24, 2025 at 4:45 PM

Nette, candles make me think of joy and light. Sounds like there's company all around and the scene seems very pleasant. Smiles!!

Joseph May

February 4, 2025 at 6:07 AM

Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely penned

thriveni c mysore

February 2, 2025 at 11:03 PM

x-axis! ha, dear. lovely write. Congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Paula Goldsmith

February 2, 2025 at 8:34 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely ABC write. Have a blessed day with your win....................

Ink Empress

January 22, 2025 at 10:41 AM

Love your abc, so beautifully woven and delivered, in such a way that makes me close my eyes and visualize the imagery youv painted in such a stunning and creative manner ! Best wishes dear nette, sending you light always

Valsa George

January 19, 2025 at 10:15 PM

I found this contest so challenging. I had almost given up. Then some ideas came into mind. After reading yours, more ideas come into me. But I fail to connect them. Well done! All the best, dear Nette.