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Embers of a Black Heart - Five Lines

I set alight a fire burning bright It was a blaze of hope, of faith Having no tinder, I thought I might Burn my heart; and smoke billowed, wraith. I whittled at the carbon fuel, chipping as its lathe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/30/2015 10:57:00 PM
Matthew, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/30/2015 3:32:00 PM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Matthew Wetter
Date: 6/30/2015 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Sara!
Date: 6/21/2015 10:17:00 PM
Matthew, love your write, It's very inspiring Hugs Eve 7
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Matthew Wetter
Date: 6/24/2015 2:31:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 6/20/2015 11:54:00 PM
Great work, Matthew. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Hope you enjoy sharing with us like-minded souls. Regards, Viv
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Matthew Wetter
Date: 6/24/2015 2:31:00 AM
I'm glad you liked it!

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