Elvis Presley

Elvis Presley, the King A voice like velvet, he did bring With gyrating moves, dads cried he’s no saint But those gyrations made the girls scream and faint!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 12:10:00 PM

Rhonda, did you enter this in the contest? I wrote one about Elvis also. If you entered it into the contest I can take mine out. Let me know. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/27/2012 4:22:00 PM

Thank you for getting back to me. I reallylikedyours also Rhonda. I hope you are entering the contest. you do quite well with this form. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/27/2012 1:12:00 PM

No, I didn't enter this one. It's just for fun. I read yours and loved it! Definitely keep it in!! Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 11:34:00 PM

Hi,, Rhonda, i wanted to do one on the King... you did a wonderful job..thanks for sharing..p.d.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 11:40:00 PM

Thanks! It's going on 2 a.m. where I am. I think I'll quit while I'm ahead. That one was sillier than the last. Have a wonderful Friday. Blessings, rhonda

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2012 11:32:00 PM

Imagine if Elvis majored in English, he would probably be singing "You aren't anything but a hound dog". Good grammar doesn't always sound the best. Your clerihew described the King quite well.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 1/26/2012 11:37:00 PM

How funny and true!! Thanks!