Jan Allison Poet Limerick

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Elvis Not For Contest

At concerts Elvis wiggled his hips
Folks fainted and ladies licked their lips
He then dropped his drawers
Got tremendous applause
When they witnessed a total eclipse!

NOT for contest as the sponsor had an example which included lips and hips

09-15-17

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Ghita Manaila December 11, 2017 at 10:12 AM Very nice. I like very much this limerick. Jan Allison December 11, 2017 at 10:13 AM Thanks Ghita:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats September 17, 2017 at 8:30 AM GOTD! Toward the end he ate loads of donuts with jelly...it was said he could blot out the sun with his belly ~ j Jan Allison September 17, 2017 at 9:39 AM It was such a shame to see him in his final years but the king of rock and roll he will always be:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne September 16, 2017 at 10:33 AM LOL, just love this one Jan Allison September 16, 2017 at 1:55 PM Cheers jack this was my first attempt but when i saw the sponsor had hips and lips in his example i didn't think it wise to put this in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper September 15, 2017 at 9:59 PM hahaha..... :) awesome ~`* Jan Allison September 16, 2017 at 2:55 AM Cheers Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane September 15, 2017 at 12:21 PM What's this about swiveling hips and licking lips? Oh, I should've known it was something from Jan. lol Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2017 at 3:03 PM Get well soon   ... your voice is important, Lin :) Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 12:39 PM lol Lin at least it wasn't about farting! Kevin had used lips and hips in his example so when I re read it I didn't think it wise to use this for the contest even though they are totally different:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2017 at 12:14 PM - It had been a dream to meet Elvis on stage included lips and hips, Jan :) - Love it - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2017 at 3:04 PM - Get well soon you too, Jan   ... your voice is important Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 12:19 PM He would have been awesome to see in his heyday but it was so sad to see him as he got older and he ballooned in weight:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith September 15, 2017 at 11:54 AM Elvis has left the building...but he left us in awe Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 12:18 PM I have it on good authority that Elvis didn't die in 1977 as he recorded a song in 1981 it must be true I saw it on soup recently! I must ask Andrea if she saw him when she visited Graceland's recently!:-) hugs jan xx

Probir Gupta September 15, 2017 at 11:50 AM Excellent ! ... Jan Allison September 15, 2017 at 12:16 PM thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx