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At concerts Elvis wiggled his hips Folks fainted and ladies licked their lips He then dropped his drawers Got tremendous applause When they witnessed a total eclipse! NOT for contest as the sponsor had an example which included lips and hips 09-15-17

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Ghita Manaila

Date: 12/11/2017 10:12:00 AM

Very nice. I like very much this limerick.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/11/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Ghita:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 9/17/2017 8:30:00 AM

GOTD! Toward the end he ate loads of donuts with jelly...it was said he could blot out the sun with his belly ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2017 9:39:00 AM

It was such a shame to see him in his final years but the king of rock and roll he will always be:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2017 10:33:00 AM

LOL, just love this one

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2017 1:55:00 PM

Cheers jack this was my first attempt but when i saw the sponsor had hips and lips in his example i didn't think it wise to put this in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/15/2017 9:59:00 PM

hahaha..... :) awesome ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2017 2:55:00 AM

Cheers Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/15/2017 3:39:00 PM

Hi Jan , your so funny made me smile thank you your so good at doing that ::)))) hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 3:45:00 PM

aww thanks Niall, if i can make someone smile it makes it all worthwhile. I've just posted another one this really will be for the contest l keep changing my mind !:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 9/15/2017 12:21:00 PM

What's this about swiveling hips and licking lips? Oh, I should've known it was something from Jan. lol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 3:03:00 PM

Get well soon ... your voice is important, Lin :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 12:39:00 PM

lol Lin at least it wasn't about farting! Kevin had used lips and hips in his example so when I re read it I didn't think it wise to use this for the contest even though they are totally different:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2017 12:14:00 PM

- It had been a dream to meet Elvis on stage included lips and hips, Jan :) - Love it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/15/2017 3:04:00 PM

- Get well soon you too, Jan ... your voice is important

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 12:19:00 PM

He would have been awesome to see in his heyday but it was so sad to see him as he got older and he ballooned in weight:-( hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/15/2017 11:54:00 AM

Elvis has left the building...but he left us in awe

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 12:18:00 PM

I have it on good authority that Elvis didn't die in 1977 as he recorded a song in 1981 it must be true I saw it on soup recently! I must ask Andrea if she saw him when she visited Graceland's recently!:-) hugs jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/15/2017 11:50:00 AM

Excellent ! ...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2017 12:16:00 PM

thanks Probir:-) hugs Jan xx