Elvis' Last Moves

It’s a sad way to remember “Old Elvis,”
a man who did more than most with his pelvis.
Must have moved it to a feverous Las Vegas pitch,
trying to move his last fried PB and banana samitch!



The “KING” died on the throne!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 6:37 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest John. Sorry I am so late with the congratulations. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot John xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:23 PM
this is really good. One of the funniest ones in my opinion. I have read other clerihews of yours. You are GREAT with them. Congratulations.
A   Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:35 PM
JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING CLERIHEW... take care~LINDA
D. Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Congrats On Your Win' nate
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:19 AM
congrats John on a wonderful win.. and a great subject in Elvis luv.. so glad to see u on winners list my friend..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:07 PM
Yours was sure one of the funniest. I could just picture that poor old Elvis doing that pelvic thrusting when his body was starting to go to pot. Congrats on your win.
Williams Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 8:42 AM
John congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" John T. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
January 27, 2012 at 1:02 AM
JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
Trusty Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Thanks to all for the kind thoughts. I just started using this form and I'm having a lot of fun with it. I'm thinking of posting a "HEW" a day, starting today. Thank you all and stay tuned! JT
A   Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 11:34 PM
John, I have a double contest... I would like to see you enter in my battle of the CLERIHEW... this is a very good one.. sadly.. but good..always,..p.d.
Trusty Avatar
January 22, 2012 at 9:42 AM
I'm all in for this. Thanks p.d. for the heads up. Check my comment above. JT
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 5:28 PM
hahaha. I LOVE this one, john!!!
Williams Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 3:10 PM
John only thing I can say is, bless my soul.uhu am all shook up..David
Quigley Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 2:45 PM
lol John. Nothing I can add to this one. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 1:28 PM
Yes,the KING died on the throne!!!Agree with you John. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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