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Elsa the Swede

Elsa was a tall lovely Swede Cross-eyed and knock-kneed Million-dollar smile all agreed Flashing her favorite dress made of tweed A chain at her neck with a simple bead Loving kindness was her creed Drenched in thoughtfulness her every deed The biggest heart kind to any breed Elsa couldn’t stand to see any creature bleed Cautious steps not to crush spider or centipede When Elsa’s turn was up for vacation, no need to plead She chose her dream destination easily indeed All wished Elsa a heartfelt Godspeed And off went Elsa to visit the Calgary stampede She was impressed with how it was refereed And how the bulls got their revenge with speed As it was humans who most needed to heed Elsa would be back it was guaranteed AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 17, 2018

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Date: 3/17/2018 4:21:00 PM
This is one of your best yet using this form. REAlly clever, LIne.
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Date: 3/17/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2018 4:11:00 PM
- So typical a Swedish girl :))) - Swedes, Danes and Norwegians have always had "tingling jokes" about each other ... just for fun :) - Love it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2018 4:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for your cheerful visit and comment, Sunshine.
Date: 3/17/2018 3:10:00 PM
Lovely story Line, Thankfully there are a lot of Elsa's in the world.
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Date: 3/17/2018 4:43:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2018 1:40:00 PM
endearing , fascinating write so well done, line!... i am impressed.. huggs
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Date: 3/17/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, nette, for your wonderful visit and comment. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/17/2018 1:09:00 PM
what awesome monorhyme Line, you told such a brilliant story:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/17/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.

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