Elon Musk: The Empire of the Visible

When business dons the mask of politics,
it ceases to build — it begins to conquer.
Elon, you were an architect of the invisible —
a builder of empires no eye could fully grasp.
But now, you have entered the Roman forum,
where applause is short-lived,
and daggers are hidden in roses.

You played the game of gods,
but politics is not for Titans —
it is for tricksters, for shadows,
for those who understand
that visibility is the first stage of crucifixion.
What the world sees, it fears.
What it fears, it destroys.

Your umbilical cord is buried in African soil,
yet you build your castles in foreign deserts.
The wealth you command could restore rivers
to parched lands, put books in empty hands,
heal broken nations — but instead,
you joust with egos in the colosseum of fools.

You once praised kings;
now you provoke them.
But do not mistake your followers
for an army —
they are spectators in the theater of downfall.
You will not outplay the House
by flipping its cards.
The House is the game.

Retreat.
Not in cowardice —
but in strategy.
Let the quiet do your work.
History rewards those
who leave whispers in its pages,
not shouts in its squares.

And to the people:
do not crown merchants as prophets.
Do not turn billionaires into messiahs.
Power loves a puppet
but fears the poor who awaken.

Remember:
Invisibility is invincibility.
And what hides
often rules what reigns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/26/2025 6:16:00 PM
I really like that you are changing my viewpoint; alas, I am also sickened by the involvement of a foreign richest man in the world in visibly manipulating American politics. Ever since Citizens United, the U.S. has become a cesspool for plutocracy and technocracy; the only reason (I believe being a gov worker) that gov should be invisible, is because it should be boring and mechanical; a silent underbelly hum, rather than a fascist alarm screaming into every human sense.
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Beej Simrov
Date: 7/27/2025 12:58:00 AM
Your way with words and understanding of complex systems is remarkable by the way
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Chanda Katonga
Date: 7/26/2025 9:26:00 PM
Thank you, Beej Simrov, for your deeply reflective comment. I’m honored that the poem stirred a shift in viewpoint—that’s the true power of poetry: to provoke thought beyond comfort zones. Your insight about the silent hum of governance versus the blaring alarm of modern plutocracy and technocracy resonates profoundly. Indeed, when the machinery of power becomes so visible and entangled with private empires, we are forced to confront not only political decay but the myth of neutrality itself. May we continue to use words, not just to express—but to expose. With respect and solidarity, Chanda Katonga
Date: 7/9/2025 12:24:00 AM
Very insightful, Chanda - much food for thought. His Soul certainly is in a complex situation. I liked the line : the House is a game ...
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Chanda Katonga
Date: 7/9/2025 3:12:00 AM
Thank you so much — your words truly warm the soul. ?? Yes, “the House is a game,” and some games cost more than gold. I’m grateful you're journeying through these thoughts with me. More reflections await. ?
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