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Eliots Friend

You’ve got a lark on the brain I’ve got a ghost in mine Shape of the shadows of things to come Half started is only half begun In the distance I hear a violin Loosely based on ragged knee Shades of grey floating free Insipid dreams are following me Took the tragic risk Death served cold On a porcelain dish Whitest whites darkest nights twist of fate Winding roads you can’t navigate Empty room bereft of grace With frozen eyes his lips embrace Sold your soul for the title role The bill’s come due What’s happened before you can’t undo You’re gonna pay his price The valley of deaths’ a fools paradise Nosferatu walks with death His dear dear friend, walks as death walks His dear dear friend Shapes have no form shades have no color Don’t need it no more, the almighty dollar The knifes in the block, the axe it swings Listen to the bells as they ring In for a penny in for a pound Penny for the old guy Leave it where you found .....it Strawmans’ head is full of hay Nothing new has come your way Treats you as his enemy While wearing a mask of integrity No ones gonna bring you round Black birds cry the perfect sound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/24/2021 9:32:00 AM
A literary Masterpiece
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:27:00 PM
Eliot's Friend. A sure win.
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Date: 6/21/2021 4:40:00 PM
The last four lines have the "punch" of the poem. Well done.
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Date: 2/12/2021 6:16:00 PM
Wow a FAVE !! A pleasure to find your awesome poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Kimberly ~
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Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 2/17/2021 5:30:00 PM
I am humbled by your kind words ! It is truly the best gift anyone can give...their time ! Thank you ! Kim
Date: 8/24/2020 3:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Kimberly ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 9/6/2020 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so very much ! You don’t know what it means to me that you not only read my poem but sent me a thoughtful greeting ! Kim
Date: 8/24/2020 3:42:00 AM
An emotive first post and one that seems very personal to you... Great first post.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you.
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Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 10/8/2020 6:31:00 AM
When I finally found the GLARING and amateur mistake this morning which you kindly took the time to point out. It gave me an idea ?? I wanted to send this note to you. My new piece is not a reflection on you in any way. You gave me a great gift which blossomed this morning. The gifts I always appreciate the most have no monetary value, given out of respect, caring and love. Those which grow giving you a new perception or a new concept. I’m doing a lousy job of expressing my thanks ! (This poem is definitely NOT about me, because I am always spilling ink or smearing paint. And I have NOT grown past MY grumbling about these errors myself !). I am going to post it in now, It’s called The Errant “A.” Yep I did a really lousy job here. Eternally grateful for saving my face ! ?? Kim
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Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 9/6/2020 10:47:00 AM
I’m not sure if I have properly thanked you. I am still learning to navigate on this site. Any recognition of my work is true praise indeed ! Thank you ! Kim
Date: 3/14/2020 3:47:00 AM
This is a deep and thoughtful thought-provoking missive, Kimberly. I am diving in for a second read.
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Kimberly Sikorski
Date: 3/14/2020 6:27:00 PM
You are most kind ! I really appreciate that you took the time to give me a read !

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