Ellen's Old Tree

Ellen's Old Tree

It was crumbling brick and decaying wood
The front porch where we once stood

The years were hard and all too many
Now even gone was the hidden penny

Yet, in the back, the tree stood still
With time engrained sturdy will

It held a memory of another and me
Its where I carved J.H. n' E.D.

Fifty years ago when we left that mark
The sky did gray before it went dark

The clouds held back 'til we were done
Then hastily, hastily, we had to run 

I walked the still worn path to peek
And see if the letters still did speak

I touched the bark and studied it so 
The scars still there from long ago

The sky it grayed as I left our tree
When a boy ‘n girl floated past me

In one hand was his destined life
And in the other a rusty jack knife
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Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:47 PM
Delightfully beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, Jerry.
Hackett Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 4:55 AM
Thanks, this was a fun one to write. Wish you well in the new year.
George   Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 4:09 AM
I often ponder on who and what the past and present is that lies beneath these etchings carved on the trunks of trees. Wonderful writing, Jerry. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely Elaine
Hackett Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Me too, and I always look for my initials and when found wonder who the pretty lady might be.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Back with congratulations :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Wonderful pen!
Hackett Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thank you very much. You might like "Writing to Ellen" if you haven't seen it yet. Once again thank you very much.
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