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Elf Girl Dressed In Yellow

Dressed in yellow My golden haired elf girl As she swings around nature My heart in a whirl Roses like ivy Caress the swing ropes As the butterflies flutter Just like my heart hopes Her blue eyes stare As she swings to and fro I desire to reach out My hoping heart in flow Just as we touch The sun shines through the trees To feel her soft skin My heart in delightful appease Suddenly i am startled As i awake from my sleep My dream of my elf girl To my memory i shall keep http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-5.php

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/9/2009 11:12:00 AM

Ahh the sweet dreams that do come....wonderful write you have penned here!! Beautiful imagery and has a sweet softness to it! Enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing~Mary

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/26/2009 12:48:00 PM

Dream on my dear..I have a very active dream life..I cant say its all pleasant, but its sure not boring. Well done, as usual. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2009 11:58:00 AM

Dreams are so pleasant with memories we can fashion in our minds subconscious and refer to at any time we want to make up happy again... u will get your Elf Girl back.. just close your eyes again and she will appear... excellent lighthearted write, James, and I luv spending my holiday with U and your poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/26/2009 11:27:00 AM

Yo man, this poem rocks.... "my golden haired elf girl"/ "my heart in delightful appease"... Excellent rhymes-------beautiful.... New fav..........:JP]

Janette Fisher

Date: 11/26/2009 9:17:00 AM

Another beautiful piece James. It's funny how sleep and dreams can influence our writing - I often wake up with words and phrases flowing through my brain and have to get them written down before they disappear. Best wishes Janette

Donna Golden

Date: 11/26/2009 9:16:00 AM

Another fun write, James! Thanks for your constant support of my work. Have a wonderful day! Hugs, Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2009 9:10:00 AM

Lovely dream...lovely fantasy,,it is beautiful to live in dreams..i think all poets do dream so much,,otherwise we do not pen..excellent writes Frases,you send the reader to fantasy world indeed..Charma