Eleventy-Ten

Children see things in a simple way
They could teach us a lot, my friends
Makes sense and it's perfectly logical
That eleventy-ten follows ten

Sadly they have to eventually grow up
And lose their childhood innocence
Again to see the world through their eyes
Before life's problems commence

Life's not complicated as in later years
Just black and white, no greys
No traumas, no hang-ups, no challenges
To trouble their brain each day

They just say it and play it like it is
No delusions of fame or riches
They simply live and enjoy the moment
And scratch where the itchy spot itches

Those days are distant and gone forever
But I still remember them well
When I see some tots on a teeter totter
I just sit and watch for a spell

Children see things in a simple way
They could teach us a lot, my friend
Makes sense and it's perfectly logical
That eleventy-ten follows ten

@Jack Ellison 2012
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Breidenthal Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Yes Jack.. It's about living and enjoying every moment. Love these longer poems! Kids could really teach us so much. Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:52 PM
As always, you brighten my day with your visit, sweet Laura! Even brighter than sunshine!!! You are my sweetest friend on the Soup!!! Love & tight squeezy hugs, Jack! xxxx
Neels Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 6:15 AM
This is so true Jack, you made me smile today and also reflect on seeing the day through a child's eye even for just a minute :) Wilma
Ellison Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 6:20 AM
You are sweet, dear Wilma! Thanks oodles... love and happy thoughts, Jack xox
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:54 AM
My son when learning to count at a very early age would count 1, two1s, 3 I thought that was very clever at the time, lovely poem Jack xx
Ellison Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 5:57 AM
My son just turned 45 and he still counts like that!!! LOL Just kidding... glad you enjoyed my wee poem! Love and hugs, Jack
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 2:55 PM
Cute one! Yes, it is a long distance that I have gone since childhood living in that carefree zone..Enjoyed reading your work today..Sara
Ellison Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 3:26 PM
Thanks for dropping by Sara! Glad you liked it... love and big hugs, Jack
Wellington Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Jack, I start to giggle before I even read your poem, by just looking at the topic. you do have a way with words, Jack. One love. Joy Wells
Ellison Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 2:14 PM
You are sweet, my dear Joy! Thanks a bunch... love and hugs, Jack
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 10:10 AM
with child-like wonder, i am move by this engaging poem,jack... much savored!..:) huggs
Ellison Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 2:15 PM
Thank you very much my dear friend! Please drop by again... love Jack xox
Gorelick Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 9:58 AM
HOw adorable..and how true..loveit. BG
Ellison Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 2:18 PM
Glad you liked it Barbara... we still could learn a lot from the wee folk eh! Love and hugs, Jack xox
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