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Eleven Thoughts On the Eleventh Day

eleven thoughts on the eleventh day. January white crunch blankets bare bones clack as wolfwinds wander. sun absentee landlord mummified in clouds sheds white lint. snow angels line our street wearing little children feet. now begins time stilled days stretching into distant Spring. sound cuts the air shattering ice filled thought children, exotic birds flit down our road colour darting over a blank page bird song welcome life on muffled windless days 2a.m.revelers weekend nomads roar through my hibernation sleepus interruptus damn. nature must be dreaming lust filled moments she moans and whimpers roars and sighs through January skies. old ash tree felled by gusts of September you are welcome on my hearth. woolen socks for your itch I thank you on my January toes.

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Date: 8/23/2017 7:44:00 AM
And on the twelfth day she rested:-) The title grabbed me this morning. The way your mind meanders is a delight, even through bleary eyes. This is of the "pick a favorite verse" variety. Tough job. "Sleepus interruptus" is off the charts! Last two are knocking on hall of fame. Dang, even though it covers my least favorite time of year — winter — this one warmed me cockles. ~ j
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/23/2017 8:23:00 AM
Winter is no longer even tolerable for me. I have thoughts that renew my love of it for there are some beautiful and some terrifying moments. Never halfway. Thank you John for braveing winter to read my poem.

Book: Shattered Sighs