Elevator Ride
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Collaboration between: Jack Horne and Sara Kendrick
The elevator's getting full,
but more are stepping in;
I'm in between two gentlemen
and wishing they were thin.
The lift opened on the sixth floor
My mouth agape in shock
There stood twenty grown men crushed in
Ten had hens and no socks
And then appeared a group of girls,
and each had heavy bags.
The doors about to shut again,
I saw a man with flags.
Pressed the close button quickly when
Someone started to sneeze
All those snotty particles flew
I was trapped in the breeze
Oh, no - another sneeze I heard,
and groaned as someone fluffed...
Enough-I'd Walk, despite the steps.
That lift was overstuffed!
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2024
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