Elena

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In Loving Memory of Elena Shapiro. ~
North Carolina ballerina,
sweet lady of the Piedmont,
she so sterling,
died from the selfishness
of a drunk driver.
Gliding into a pirouette
as she enters God's
garden of youth.

The anguish tatters the
sails of my psyche,
as the rain gently descends
from a sorrowing ash sky.
I drink the bitter taste of loss
from the goblet of the ages.
No, please, no,
she is a precious one.

The dew glistens on the
peach-hued roses of
maiden innocence,
as if tears on an infant's cheeks.
Elena, our ballerina of grace,
death passes into life,
your beauty of a June magnolia
blossom-
charming the angels who 
attend you.

Elena, Elena,
your lovely dancer's legacy
still dwells in our midst.
Your name whispered in
summer's evefall starry music. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 1/20/2024 9:42:00 AM
Such a tragedy ~ you write .from the heart with intense passion! Many people behave badly! They not only drink …they take drugs. They smoke pot, and they smoke fentanyl.. so when any of us go out crossing the street, this could be us.. Covid vaccine killed many people but nobody cares about the drug industry, the doctors that scared us to take the vaccine ..they deserve jail time as far as I’m concerned. Sorry for your pain and loss. The guy who killed her is out of jail, there is no justice on earth. Exceptional verses! PR Pangie
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Regina Elliott
Date: 1/20/2024 9:54:00 AM
Hello dear Pangie, my heart broke when this terrible tragedy happened in Raleigh, NC years back. Such a waste of a precious human life. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my elegy poem for lovely ballerina Elena. God's blessings xxoox
Date: 1/19/2024 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful tribute Regina..
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Regina Elliott
Date: 1/20/2024 6:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One. Have a grand weekend full of creativity. ~
Date: 1/19/2024 6:54:00 AM
Dear Regina, I had to read it because my oldest granddaughter's name is Elena. Such a touching tribute to a life tragically cut short. It beautifully captures the grace and beauty of Elena, both as a ballerina and as a person. The vivid imagery and emotive language create a loving narrative that resonates with me. Your words reflect the fragility of life and the enduring impact of a person’s legacy. Heartfelt Poem! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 1/20/2024 6:42:00 AM
Thank you very much, Daniel. I hope you have a grand and creative weekend. ~
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