Elements

Existence is the cauldron where elements brew
Earth, water, fire and air, are in space entwined
Each has unique attributes, maintaining life
Cognised by presence when they are aligned

Holy Spirit grazes form, beginning at root of spine
Earth comes alive, as blood begins to flow
Two thirds of the planet is water; we are likewise
We feel in stillness, our sacral water centre glow

Energy ascent continues, igniting fire in the navel
So enlivening and comforting is magnetic heat
But what avail the spark, if there be no movement 
Breeze of air obliges, making our heart upbeat

Thus from root to sacral, navel and then our heart
Grace activates all elements and body glands
Passing through throat corresponding to aether
Into the head ovoid to cognise God’s heavenly lands

Ancient Hermitic wisdom affirms: as above, so below
Made in God’s image, we represent the whole
Five senses, elements and electricities as yet unknown
Oh hermit, we ourselves are the light, scriptures extol

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Date: 8/26/2023 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem on five elements. First time, I have read a good interpretation. Thank you.
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Date: 8/26/2023 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Jay. It actually is correspondent to our energy body and the chakra system as in scriptures and as we may directly feel, during meditation. Root or Muladhara corresponds to Earth, Sacral to Water, navel or Manipura to Fire, heart or Anahata to Air, throat or Vishuddha to Aether, being the immanent containing the elements and the head chakras, to the transcendent.
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