Elemental Designs

ELEMENTAL DESIGN

Hydrogen to Helium
A fusion formed by gravity
A carbon-based delirium
Molecularly infinite energy

An ancient discipline known as alchemy
We’re consciousness - the explosion - amorous 
We dream of gold from lead and mercury
Fueled reaction in copper with phosphorus 
A universal age of prosperity

Bismuth bath. Deficient of iron and zinc
Astronautic laugh – last shine of hope
Nuclear decay –enlightened way – elemental - instinct
Scientific – logical clay – gaseous isotope.

The fluoride, we drink?
Humanity on the pivotal brink

The edge, a precipice.

Lanthanides and actinides
Metals and mysteries.
Shrink down to atomic scale
Our intellect – an accelerated history
Reality?
A holographic projection
Radioactive expansion
A gravitational trajectory 

Inertia 

Precious pavonine pearl
Our planet, our world.
A place all our elements may inhabit
Terrestrially unique. Diverse and intelligent
The push of inertia
The pull of gravity
The spin of an atom
The spin of our galaxy.

The end.



(written for the periodic table of elements poetry contest) 12-12-14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/3/2023 10:49:00 AM
I loved This poem, mostly because it includes chemistry and i love chemistry
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Date: 10/9/2015 11:02:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your tech prom Joel. Awesome use of 4 to 5 syllable rhymes man.
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Joel Thornton
Date: 10/10/2015 2:53:00 AM
Thank you very much
Date: 1/11/2015 9:35:00 PM
JOEL,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Date: 1/10/2015 11:18:00 AM
Joel, congratulations on an excellent well- written winning piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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Date: 1/8/2015 1:14:00 PM
Oops, also added you to my fav poet list!
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Date: 1/8/2015 1:12:00 PM
Excellent! A Fav! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:07:00 PM
Congrats on your great work. I enjoyed reading a winner. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:44:00 AM
Well done, Joel exceptionally clever xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:13:00 PM
Wow...........I would place this higher on the winner's list !! You did a wonderful job and covered the elementary table beautifully !! Bravo !
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Joel Thornton
Date: 1/17/2015 2:13:00 PM
I thought so also..not to say the other winners wherent as good..but I put a lot of effort in to keeping focus on the periodic table of elements and made sure it was the subject
Date: 1/6/2015 5:54:00 PM
I just loved it! a 7 & a fav! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Joel Thornton
Date: 1/17/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much..I really enjoyed writing this one..approached as a homework assignment. But a assignment of passion not obligation
Date: 1/6/2015 5:06:00 PM
Excellent write on the elements many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:33:00 PM
Joel, congratulations on your win. Our planet, a place all our elements may inhabit. 7+
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:28:00 AM
Hi Joel! Enjoyed this illuminating write about the elements. You are very well informed. Congratulations on this fine win. // paul
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Joel Thornton
Date: 1/17/2015 2:03:00 PM
Thanks..I try to be. Also feel it's a duty to inform others if in possession of the abilityto do so
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