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ELEMENT OF WATER-BEARER

Unorthodox, this water- bearer rules, an Aquarian god moody yet calm in the face of persistent winds…his pail of wine gushing on mouths of February streams, like an outpour into first night’s cycle of unpredictable moves, reigning like a prince-in-waiting, this heir from brazen garnet stars: Oh, his vision is light years ahead of time; breaking from clasps of tradition, his maverick streaks defy life's norms and while he dives into a crest of independence, fool he is for needing warmth and affection. Yet,a blend of hermit's pride and gentleness dares the element of air to brew a storm, then romances the lusty sea of love in a flash... pray tell, how can one define a mystery? ------------ Brian Strand's Contest No 214

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/30/2018 11:01:00 PM
Beautiful, nette. Congrats on your much deserved win.
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Date: 8/25/2014 9:15:00 AM
many congratulations on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2014 1:09:00 AM
Capricorn are blessed by Saturn with a long happy life, Congrats. nette
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Date: 8/24/2014 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on this fine poem placing so high my friend!!
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:37:00 AM
stunning write Nette congrats on fine win hugs
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:17:00 AM
- Hey Nette, congratulations on your first place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:51:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on a TOP of the class win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:46:00 AM
A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Nette! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 7/14/2014 3:27:00 PM
wow, you really captured the essence of Aquarius. I am seeing so many based on that one sign already!! So you are Capricorn, huh? I bet you have water or fire for your moon sign then. You are not all EArth!! (thanks for the contest win, btw)
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Date: 7/12/2014 7:02:00 AM
I love the contrasts you drew within the water bearer; proud and gentle, daring and romantic. Think you have another winner.
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:56:00 PM
Nette; I really like this. The storm romances the lusty sea. That is a great line. Good luck in the contest... Luycilla
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Date: 7/10/2014 6:44:00 PM
Dear Nette: Words beyond words in lyrical perfume. Lovely magic. Enjoyed. Leon
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Date: 7/10/2014 1:59:00 PM
One defines a Mystery by living it Nette. Your beautiful poetry is mystetious and awfully stellar! Perhaps he is not a fool, rather a desperate Legend. I quote the entire poem in admiration. I love the tempestuous maverick attitude. A FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/10/2014 1:50:00 PM
Awesome work Nette! Aquarian the zodiac wud be so proud of u! Sure winner,, gl in contest!
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Date: 7/10/2014 5:43:00 AM
Wow, your emotional tones just pour from Aquarian's fluid imagery, adding substance and impact for reader to experience. Genuis like the water-bearer!
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Date: 7/9/2014 7:16:00 PM
Nette, what a beautifully descriptive poem about the Aquarian water bearer. Well done, your words flowed onto the page as his water from the pail.
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Date: 7/9/2014 5:20:00 PM
Nette, how could one pick a favorite among your gallery of splendor.. It's beyond comprehension. But if it were possible this incredible write would occupy center stage.. At least it would in my eyes!
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Date: 7/9/2014 4:38:00 PM
Geez, your poem is like a sweet drug. I got hooked on the magnificence of your eloquent perceptions of an Aquarian; I am one and your last line, a killer, Nette
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