Kim Rodrigues Poet Sedoka

Element of Air

slippery leaves lie
on the steepness of the yard
haphazardly on the road

autumn spokes in air
the travesty of cancer
shedding of the lovely oaks

10/29/2020
Contest: Spin a Sedoka
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest title: ELEMENT OF AIR

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Paula Goldsmith November 8, 2020 at 10:36 AM Congratulations on your win. Autumn will be gone soon in exchange for the cold winter. Enjoy your win with blessings................. Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2020 at 11:39 AM Thank you, Paula!

Constance La France November 5, 2020 at 4:05 AM Kim, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, the line "shedding of the lovely oaks" touched my heart _Constance Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2020 at 4:15 AM Thanks, Constance. My “mommy” is losing her hair. Be blessed!

Carol Mitra November 4, 2020 at 9:38 PM Yes...Beautifully penned...Congrats on your win. Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2020 at 4:15 AM Thank you, Carol!

Beata Agustin November 4, 2020 at 6:31 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously feel Autumn air here in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you. Kim Rodrigues November 5, 2020 at 4:16 AM God bless you, Beata, a wonderful, sweet lady, always.

JC Brul November 4, 2020 at 3:38 PM Spectacular poem dear Kim.Congratulations on your top win.. Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2020 at 6:00 PM Thank you, JCB

Alkas Poetry November 1, 2020 at 3:53 AM a poem with a relevant image of poetry, o feel yr absence in my poems salute alkas Kim Rodrigues November 1, 2020 at 9:59 AM Thank you, Alkas!

Victor Buhagiar October 29, 2020 at 9:44 AM A heartfelt poem. Joining you in prayers. ~~ Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2020 at 11:47 AM And you too, my friend! <3