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Element of Air

slippery leaves lie on the steepness of the yard haphazardly on the road autumn spokes in air the travesty of cancer shedding of the lovely oaks 10/29/2020 Contest: Spin a Sedoka Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest title: ELEMENT OF AIR Checked with howmanysyllables 5/7/7 5/7/7

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Date: 11/8/2020 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Autumn will be gone soon in exchange for the cold winter. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2020 11:39:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/5/2020 4:05:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in Nette's Sedoka contest with this excellent poem, the line "shedding of the lovely oaks" touched my heart _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 4:15:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. My “mommy” is losing her hair. Be blessed!
Date: 11/4/2020 9:38:00 PM
Yes...Beautifully penned...Congrats on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 4:15:00 AM
Thank you, Carol!
Date: 11/4/2020 6:31:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me vicariously feel Autumn air here in my "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/5/2020 4:16:00 AM
God bless you, Beata, a wonderful, sweet lady, always.
Date: 11/4/2020 3:38:00 PM
Spectacular poem dear Kim.Congratulations on your top win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2020 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, JCB
Date: 11/1/2020 3:53:00 AM
a poem with a relevant image of poetry, o feel yr absence in my poems salute alkas
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2020 9:59:00 AM
Thank you, Alkas!
Date: 10/29/2020 9:44:00 AM
A heartfelt poem. Joining you in prayers. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2020 11:47:00 AM
And you too, my friend! <3

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