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Elegy To a Weeping Willow

Elegy to a Weeping Willow A weeping willow once danced in the yard. Now dead the naked trunk’s remembering, the man, the woman and the little girls, from Sixties years of Kennedy and King. Her hair blew gently as she often cried, flowing like a pond of ripples in the wind, swaying tendrils to a breeze so dreamy, seen through a screen door softly it appeared. This weeping willow watched a family grow, and gracefully it aged with timely breath. Yet, as years passed and strangers came and went, wicked changes caused her journey into death. 5/24/17

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Date: 5/2/2020 10:20:00 PM
Janis, a lovely metaphoric poem in which the reader captures the essence of the weeping willow. ~ Sonia
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Date: 5/30/2017 10:56:00 AM
This is a touching poem, Janis:) congratulations:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/30/2017 4:22:00 PM
Thanks Jo. Good to hear from you.
Date: 5/30/2017 7:12:00 AM
Greetings Janis. Congrats for your WIN with this emotional piece.
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Date: 5/30/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thanks Teddy. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 5/29/2017 4:45:00 PM
Janis, this is very moving. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/30/2017 4:26:00 PM
Thanks Janice. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Date: 5/28/2017 8:01:00 AM
Wow! So beautiful! Congrats!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/29/2017 1:17:00 AM
thanks Kim.
Date: 5/27/2017 6:46:00 PM
I love trees too, Janis, and your poem is indeed moving. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/27/2017 10:50:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. I especially love weeping willows.
Date: 5/24/2017 9:54:00 AM
I feel very deeply attached to trees Janis and your lovely poem touched my heart. 7 ; )
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/26/2017 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Connie.

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