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Elegy On Cherubic Chap Laloo - Couplets

I recall, bringing you home, quite small and cuddly Bouncing around eyes flashing, ears floppy. Your passion: chewing all and making mess around Put your head down as you heard my foot sound. But were my security guard in my old age Barking at each of passer-by in rage. When I had hard days at work, you waited for me Wagging your tail to say, “Welcome, missed thee” While I read the newspaper, you hopped on my lap Asked nothing more than pat your head to tap. Old age took its toll, unable to stand on your legs Drove you last time to wet like scrambled egg As the vet led you away, you turned and looked back As if to say, “Thanks, for taking care, Jack” I will always remember you the way you were- One lovable, huggable pile of fur. He waits, not playing, sits all alone in heaven For he knows his master will come leavened I wait out in the dark and cold for hand of death He will hear the sound; will bark, at the wreath. ============================================ 2-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta First Place win Contest: Elegy Form by Constance * Laloo is the Indian name of my huggable pile of fur.

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Date: 12/4/2013 9:14:00 AM
Nice win Dr. Ram, This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this one....Roger
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Date: 12/4/2013 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend Dr. Ram! A great write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:41:00 PM
congrats on your win, dr, ram.. huggs
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:39:00 AM
TRUE SENTIMENTS OF A MAN WHO LOST HIS BEST FRIEND. THANKS RAM. I ENJOYED THE PIECE. FRIENDM,JM
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:33:00 PM
Thank you for your congrads I appricate your comments on my work.
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Date: 11/2/2013 4:01:00 PM
Very touching portrayal of man's best friend! You should change wet to vet/ Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:13:00 PM
..What a beautiful moving poem.. made me cry, Thank you so much for reading my poetry and commenting on it.
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Date: 11/2/2013 3:00:00 PM
Cute one.It is sad to loose a pet that is with us for a very long time..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2013 1:48:00 PM
Ooh.....make me cry. Such faithful creatures are our pets......sorry you lost your lovable Laloo. Hugs SuZ
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