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Elegy For My Stepfather

You took her
From all of us
You got the blame
You never understood us
You ignored us
She loved you
She then ignored us too
You created a sort of destruction 
In the hearts of us
Indirectly
You caused the creation of fear
A fear of abandonment 
A fear of alcohol
A fear of our own mother
A fear for our own mother
A fear of her destroying herself
Just as you had

You were a creationist 
You were an artist
You were the sculptor of the 
Dent in the wall 
And the musician of the
Noise upstairs
I never had much of an appreciation of your work

But asked by the only woman capable of loving you
To create something of the memory of you
I create something too
I string letters together 
To create words
I piece those words together 
To create statements
And with these statements I say the only thing on my mind 
Since your heart of cruel origins stopped beating
Thank God you're not here
To create anymore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/6/2016 10:17:00 PM
HEATHER CROSBY, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:05:00 PM
nice to read this poem again
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Date: 11/15/2015 6:30:00 PM
Hi Heather, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/10/2015 8:17:00 AM
Hi Heather, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/9/2015 7:42:00 PM
Heather, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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