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Elegy for a Dragonfly: A Sonnet

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Its wings were double fronds of gauzy green, its fragile form a long and tapered flair— this fallen dragonfly I had not seen before, when I had walked out on my stair. I bent and saw that it was not alive, its body crushed, its wings ravaged and torn. Yet something of its beauty still survived— a remnant of the luster it had borne. I marveled at such elegance in death, a noble creature, still, upon my stair. A wave of melancholy took my breath, and eyes welled for a thing so fine and rare. I put the grief away and dried my eyes. Such is the way of tears and dragonflies.

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Date: 8/19/2024 4:50:00 PM
I really like this poem. I love insects and dragonflies in general, so this caught my interest right off the bat. The way you used the words crushed, ravaged, torn along with the general beauty of this poem just spoke to me. I don’t know how to put it in words exactly lol. It reminds me of how fleeting beauty is
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Date: 8/7/2024 1:30:00 PM
Katherine, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful and amazing elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, and congrats on the POTD too, Constance
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Date: 7/25/2024 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! My grandson was grieving the bee in the driveway. Compassionate hearts.
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Date: 7/23/2024 10:29:00 PM
Loved this beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/23/2024 5:57:00 PM
"I put the grief away and dried my eyes. Such is the way of tears and dragonflies." - A grand writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2024 5:01:00 AM
this touched me deeply. a haunting poem.
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Date: 7/21/2024 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write for a dragonfly. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a great day with your POTD win.........................
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Date: 7/20/2024 9:00:00 PM
This is quite the elegy for the dragonfly. Takes a wide-open eye and sensitive soul to pen this one. Congrats on potd!
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Date: 7/20/2024 5:59:00 PM
WOW. A very worthy honorable POTD. Definitely one of my favorites. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/20/2024 3:52:00 PM
Your elegy is the most sensitive and touching poem I have come across in a long time! Death can be elegant...your portrayal of the Dragonfly is done so masterfully with such a tender and loving touch! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 7/20/2024 2:43:00 PM
I loved your last line Katherine, the best amoung those superb combinations you so gracefully and sensitive penned. Congratulations on yiur POTD. Best - Ken
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Date: 7/20/2024 1:40:00 PM
' I marveled at such elegance in death. ' This thought made my eyes misty. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Life and then death, it truly makes you think. Congratulations Katharine, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/20/2024 1:25:00 PM
Hey! Congrats on your POTD! :)
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Date: 7/20/2024 10:25:00 AM
A captivating piece, Katharine, and congrats on POTD.
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Date: 7/20/2024 7:24:00 AM
Dear Katherine what a beautiful elegy and speaks so much to our own lives. Congratulations on POTD! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/20/2024 6:40:00 AM
Very nicely crafted, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 7/20/2024 5:32:00 AM
Just beautiful Katherine! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
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Date: 7/20/2024 4:47:00 AM
Beautiful poetry and excellent POTD choice. Enjoy your day in full sun
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Date: 7/20/2024 3:59:00 AM
Dear Katherine,, This is so masterly composed I felt I was reading a classic poet. Absolutely lovely penning here. Congratulations on this POTD and have a blessed day.
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Date: 7/20/2024 3:52:00 AM
WOW...I shall give you a Boston "WICKED AWESOME" for this magnificent ode to the dragonfly...an elegy encased in a sonnet...so similar to the dragonfly itself..
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Date: 7/23/2024 11:09:00 AM
Thanks John, from sea-sprayed Cape Cod!
Date: 7/20/2024 3:15:00 AM
So, so sensitive and tender ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 7/20/2024 1:05:00 AM
This beautiful poem of nature rings with poetic sadness in a thoughtful elegy. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/20/2024 12:52:00 AM
Congratulations Katharine, what an elegant tribute to “such elegance in death”!
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Date: 7/20/2024 12:35:00 AM
What a lovely poem and such a tender beautiful heart you have to write it! Congratulations on your potd!
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Date: 7/20/2024 12:03:00 AM
Katharine, Such is the love.., so much survived in this last flight. Yours for the telling. -Richard
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