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Rhythmic pose arcs lifting elegant ambience
Graceful dance enshrines artful renascence
Visceral posture invites emotional response
Festive celebration of aesthetic renaissance.

Attired in red and blue of simple elegance 
Glorious style augments swirling excellence
Left arm risen high points gracious eminence
Finger tips lift vivid attire in quiet eloquence.

Golden bangles adorn wrists flirting in stare
A lone yellow flower crowns her silky hair
Folded right arm obstructs in a defiant dare
Index finger hides grief, eyes closed in prayer.

Head turned right, arched with sculpted flair
Tense neck muscles manifest muted despair
Open fingers gesture a stealth grievous flare
Air of intellectual grandeur opulently glares.

Ponder why the painter didn't show her eyes
Discover invisible pain vibrant colors disguise
Beneath the splendor lies a hidden surprise
Cultural dance-music echoes her silent cries.
 
First place win
September 22, 2017
Poems that paint a picture
Painter: Anna Razumovskaya
Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/10/2018 6:40:00 PM
This one now has fourth spot on your Best poems list, Vijay. It was a wonderful win for you in Silent One's contest.
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:17:00 AM
well done! congrats' on the win, Vijay! i like the mesmerising description of the dancer, seeing the colours and style very well put. cheers!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thank you John!
Date: 9/27/2017 9:34:00 AM
Well deserved win. Congratulations Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 1:05:00 PM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 9/27/2017 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Jack!
Date: 9/27/2017 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations, Vijay. A great poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 4:36:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 9/27/2017 12:45:00 AM
AWESOME poem and win, Vijay. Well deserved.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2017 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 9/26/2017 3:35:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you Vijay on your big win with this lovely and expressive poem! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 9/26/2017 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations for your great win Vijay! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi!
Date: 9/26/2017 1:51:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 9/26/2017 12:55:00 PM
Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you BW!
Date: 9/26/2017 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win , Vijay ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 9/26/2017 9:48:00 AM
Bravo Vijay, wonderful rhyming skills, congratulations...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Charlie--appreciate your comments!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, beautiful .... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Eve--congrats to you as well, on your BIG win!
Date: 9/26/2017 8:01:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. Exceptional rhyme , imagery and flow.. "Golden bangles adorn wrists flirting in stare A lone yellow flower crowns her silky hair Folded right arm obstructs in a defiant dare Index finger hides grief, eyes closed in prayer."
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 10:10:00 AM
Such a pleasure to read awesome feedback from a renowned poet like you, Robert!
Date: 9/26/2017 7:14:00 AM
What can I say, but you are the master of rhyme.. Another excellent write from your pen.. You have become one of my favourite poets.. Congratulations on first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/26/2017 7:22:00 AM
Appreciate such lovely comments from a master poet!
Date: 9/23/2017 2:38:00 PM
- You give this picture beautiful lines in a wonderful dance - GL in the contest, Vijay :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/23/2017 7:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem that compliments the beautiful picture Vijay, a joy to read, GL in contest. :))
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 7:25:00 AM
Many thanks Roy--appreciate your lovely comments!
Date: 9/22/2017 9:33:00 PM
Noticeably nice observation and its wonderful rendering into poetry ... Beautiful ... Good luck ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/23/2017 5:18:00 AM
I am quite pleased with your lovely feedback Probir!
Date: 9/22/2017 7:20:00 PM
An elegant and lively poem Vijay. Lovely lines with vibrant imagery. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Susan.. appreciate your thoughtful comments!
Date: 9/22/2017 5:59:00 PM
Excellent! Vijay. I like how you pointed out the painter not showing her eyes. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 6:38:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..appreciate you lovely comments!
Date: 9/22/2017 4:05:00 PM
lush description of the painting! definitely a win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 4:16:00 PM
Many thanks Jack for your lovely feedback!
Date: 9/22/2017 1:51:00 PM
This is so beautifully written! It truly does paint a picture in this readers' mind! Lovely.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 3:15:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and your lovely comments Becca!
Date: 9/22/2017 9:30:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem--very colorful and detailed! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/22/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Janice--love your feedback!
Date: 9/22/2017 9:29:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem--very colorful and detailed! Janice
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Date: 9/22/2017 9:22:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem--very colorful and detailed! Janice
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