Notes About The Poem

Elegant Dance

Rhythmic pose arcs lifting elegant ambience
Graceful dance enshrines artful renascence
Visceral posture invites emotional response
Festive celebration of aesthetic renaissance.

Attired in red and blue of simple elegance 
Glorious style augments swirling excellence
Left arm risen high points gracious eminence
Finger tips lift vivid attire in quiet eloquence.

Golden bangles adorn wrists flirting in stare
A lone yellow flower crowns her silky hair
Folded right arm obstructs in a defiant dare
Index finger hides grief, eyes closed in prayer.

Head turned right, arched with sculpted flair
Tense neck muscles manifest muted despair
Open fingers gesture a stealth grievous flare
Air of intellectual grandeur opulently glares.

Ponder why the painter didn't show her eyes
Discover invisible pain vibrant colors disguise
Beneath the splendor lies a hidden surprise
Cultural dance-music echoes her silent cries.
 

September 22, 2017
Placed 1st:Poems that paint a picture
Painter: Anna Razumovskaya
Sponsor: Silent One
HM: Strand choice U contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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George Avatar
May 3, 2023 at 8:32 AM
This is an excellent Ekphrasis. The dance and the girl's dancing postures are beautifully presented.
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:40 PM
This one now has fourth spot on your Best poems list, Vijay. It was a wonderful win for you in Silent One's contest.
Leong Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 11:17 AM
well done! congrats' on the win, Vijay! i like the mesmerising description of the dancer, seeing the colours and style very well put. cheers!
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Thank you John!
Schiavina Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Well deserved win. Congratulations Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Frances!
Webster Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Jack!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations, Vijay. A great poem.
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 12:45 AM
AWESOME poem and win, Vijay. Well deserved.
Pandit Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 4:35 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Back again to congratulate you Vijay on your big win with this lovely and expressive poem! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Susan!
Sands Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 2:58 PM
Congratulations for your great win Vijay! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Heidi!
May Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Congrats on your top win Vijay
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Joseph!
La France Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:55 PM
Vijay, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Thank you BW!
Gupta Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your top win , Vijay ...
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Thank you Probir!
Smith Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Bravo Vijay, wonderful rhyming skills, congratulations...
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Charlie--appreciate your comments!
Roper Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay, beautiful .... Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:11 AM
Thanks Eve--congrats to you as well, on your BIG win!
Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:01 AM
Congrats on your fine win my friend. Exceptional rhyme , imagery and flow.. "Golden bangles adorn wrists flirting in stare A lone yellow flower crowns her silky hair Folded right arm obstructs in a defiant dare Index finger hides grief, eyes closed in prayer."
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Such a pleasure to read awesome feedback from a renowned poet like you, Robert!
One Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:14 AM
What can I say, but you are the master of rhyme.. Another excellent write from your pen.. You have become one of my favourite poets.. Congratulations on first place in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 7:22 AM
Appreciate such lovely comments from a master poet!
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:38 PM
- You give this picture beautiful lines in a wonderful dance - GL in the contest, Vijay :) - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Pett Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:16 AM
A beautiful poem that compliments the beautiful picture Vijay, a joy to read, GL in contest. :))
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Many thanks Roy--appreciate your lovely comments!
Gupta Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Noticeably nice observation and its wonderful rendering into poetry ... Beautiful ... Good luck ...
Pandit Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:18 AM
I am quite pleased with your lovely feedback Probir!
Ashley Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 7:20 PM
An elegant and lively poem Vijay. Lovely lines with vibrant imagery. Good luck in the contest! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Thank you Susan.. appreciate your thoughtful comments!
Sands Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Excellent! Vijay. I like how you pointed out the painter not showing her eyes. Good luck in the contest. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Thank you Heidi..appreciate you lovely comments!
Webster Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:05 PM
lush description of the painting! definitely a win!
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 4:16 PM
Many thanks Jack for your lovely feedback!
Teagan Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 1:51 PM
This is so beautifully written! It truly does paint a picture in this readers' mind! Lovely.
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Thank you for your visit and your lovely comments Becca!
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem--very colorful and detailed! Janice
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Thank you Janice--love your feedback!
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Beautifully descriptive poem--very colorful and detailed! Janice
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