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Electrical Rainbows

Along this paradise shore On a land far from here Admiring 'an' naked silhouette Below a lunar sphere Invisible sounds resonate Against purple cobalt skies A gentle lapping of the waves Caressing sands in soft apply The horizon comes alive With yellow, orange and red Electrical rainbows aflame As the darkened skies are bled Within minutes this scene has gone As the sun goes down at sea Another marvel befalls my eyes In nature you can guarantee http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-9.php

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Date: 7/4/2010 6:57:00 AM
this blew me away loved the imagery too jim thanks for your help hey if you want listen to my new song on reverbnation its even better then the other ones thanks again and for your kind comment
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:57:00 AM
Your write is so....electrical! Great images created through your words , James.'Electrical rainbows aflame As the darkened skies are bled' excellent lines! Emily
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:06:00 PM
A nice expressive title - something unique about the rainbows
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:48:00 PM
this was just electric, James! Perfect title and what a great write about rainbows --I could just picture this in my mind--very vivid indeed! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:12:00 PM
Quite visual and vivid James.. enjoyed this electrical rainbow.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in AlohA Land..
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:24:00 PM
Super imagery James. Love the 'purple cobalt skies' (typo in line 3 - 'an') ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/3/2010 3:18:00 PM
That is wonderful You are a great poet man !!! sarah x
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:05:00 PM
Dear James, the only way to make these colorful moments last is to capture them in photos or in words. You have definitely succeeded in the latter and this is an image I won't forget! Love, Carolyn
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