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Electric Fly

                I soar 
     with brutish strength,
      I fall for a whirlwind;
What I want is a sweet escape
              with you;
Dancing along a lightning bolt 
        electric tingles fly
          charging a fire 
                 in me.

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Date: 2/1/2024 9:23:00 AM
Very nice. I especially like the line "I fall for a whirlwind;"
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 2/1/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you! Love can be a whirlwind. No? Blessings.

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