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Electric Broomstick

Electric Broomstick My Mother Often said Her other car Was a new and spiffy electric broom Whoops! Upside down! Hold on tight for this flight And right on track For quite a Shocking Ride! 10-10-20 Double Tetractys 4 Sponsor: "Eve Roper

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2020 2:31:00 PM

Aw, Sam, what a fun and fantastic poem.. so whimsical with just a pinch of Halloween flavor! I love it!! Your wit is as enchanting as your exquisite rhyme. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/20/2020 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, Sam, your kindness is humbling and like a mirror I reflect your warm feelings back to you. Your mom must have been sprinkled with whimsy and spiced with wonderful! I relish your reverie of your mom’s humor, my dear rhyme time friend.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2020 4:25:00 PM

Thank you my eloquent partner in rhyme! A dash of magic, a pinch of mischief all sprinkled with a smidge of an enchanting spell for Halloween. My mom used to make me laugh with this bit of humor. Always enjoy your visits. I am inspired by your poems and your gracious messages! Sending an abundance of harvest blessings dear friend!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/17/2020 6:32:00 AM

Congratulations Sam, this is a thought provoked poem and I love it - this deserved a win my friend - wonderful when family members have a sense of humor and can laugh at themselves with you. Great poem and win Sam, Blessings and Hugs, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/19/2020 4:29:00 PM

I am so happy :) you liked this bit of Halloween humor and my mother's whimsy! Good to remember her funny sayings! She did have quite a sense of humor. Always wonderful to hear from you - know your business has kept you hopping! Have experienced the same. Sending you an abundance of harvest blessings and hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2020 7:11:00 PM

what a cool one with Halloween coming. Congrats!!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/16/2020 10:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea! My mother's sense of humor just would not leave me alone for this one. It was fun to remember her zany saying. Hope all is beautiful in the Wasatch! Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/16/2020 8:32:00 AM

- Congratulations on your admirable win poem, Sam :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/20/2020 11:29:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! Am so sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your uplifting message. So glad you like this one. My mom was fun, especially on Halloween. She really embraced the spirit of revelry on that day. Sending you hugs.

Joanna Feltham

Date: 10/16/2020 1:37:00 AM

I love this, very original. Congratulations on your win. :-)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/20/2020 11:26:00 AM

Hi Joanna! Thank you for your visit and your congratulations. Took a chance on this entry but Halloween always reminds me of my mom's funny saying her love of the celebration. She used to dress up as a cat to give out treats. All the best.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/15/2020 7:27:00 PM

Hey this is amazing. This word broom opened up the locked section of Wizarding world in my mind. An excellent fun poem. Congratulations on your win.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/20/2020 11:23:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda for your congratulations, a peek into your world of fantasy and your wonderful message :)! It is so nice to meet you! All the best!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/15/2020 7:06:00 PM

Ha Sam! Fun write. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/20/2020 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your congratulations and your delightful message. My mom made Halloween fun. Happy haunting my friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2020 6:22:00 PM

Sam, your mom seems like a fun lady. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/17/2020 9:14:00 PM

She was a character and had all kinds of funny sayings. I do find myself repeating them. Eve, thank you for sponsoring this fun contest and for your placement. I so appreciate it. It was fun, especially remembering my mom in a light moment. Harvest blessings.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2020 1:07:00 PM

what a fun poem Sam:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/12/2020 1:16:00 PM

PS - found the typo! That broom must be bewitched!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/12/2020 1:14:00 PM

Thank you Jan. What a wonderful compliment from a poet with a well developed mastery of humor -a streak of mischief and humor that constantly escapes into your wonderful humorous writes! All the best. Harvest hugs! Off to try and tame that broom!