Election Questionku

Caught in a coat
too tight on my throat
How could I sing a note

Caught in a boat
that would never float
How should I give my vote
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Lamoureux Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 8:23 AM
I like how you have added Rhyme to the Questionku.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 1:32 PM
For that one, it was a sudden flow! Perhaps too much anger and rage and fear in a long, long silence that needed to be broken. Everyday smiling gets harder and harder.
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 10:19 PM
I especially liked that first one. it was very clever.
Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Thanks for taking time! Presidential elections ahead; I hope it won't come to civil war...
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