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Robert A. Dufresne

Electic Comb

Gonna take my comb outa my pocket,
May as well kiss it goodby and hock it.
This is much less trying, 
although close to frying.
Just stick my tongue in the light socket.

Copyright © Robert A. Dufresne | Year Posted 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley

September 17, 2011 at 9:06 PM

That light socket might comb your hair for you! Fun and a chuckle, I love it.

August 25, 2011 at 8:20 PM

Good one..That would be a great modern style..Got a chuckle..Sara

Richard Pickett

August 25, 2011 at 11:20 AM

Male pattern, so it is called, Therefore my friend I won't call you bald, Keep the comb handy, because someday, You might just sport a new Toupee,....lol Love it my friend..and yes I am Backkkkk... I will be in touch...Love and God Bless...The Original Taz! BTW Brick may stop by....

Black Eyed Susan

August 23, 2011 at 9:08 PM

congratulations on your win Robert! not an easy rhyme scheme, but you did it impressively and w/a great flow too. it matches the picture to a t :)

August 23, 2011 at 12:32 PM

I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : )

Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2011 at 12:47 AM

oh, and I see from comments below that congats are in order too!! Yay for you!!! (I hope I can finally get time to see some winners' lists!!)

Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2011 at 12:46 AM

hahaha. Great ending!!

August 22, 2011 at 3:43 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Robert

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 22, 2011 at 3:35 PM

Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Robert. Love, Carol

August 22, 2011 at 10:12 AM

Great win. Good for you. Tony

August 22, 2011 at 1:09 AM

tou and your funny bone, robert..lol.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs!

August 22, 2011 at 12:41 AM

Had to laugh at this one my friend. Reminds me of the picture that prompted the Wolf Man. Great job. God Bless, JB

August 22, 2011 at 12:25 AM

Congratulations on your big win with your humorous poem. Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

August 21, 2011 at 9:55 PM

Congrats and lol!! Thanks for your comments on my work!

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2011 at 4:59 PM

hahaha. Fun one. and a big Congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 21, 2011 at 4:17 PM

Congrats Robert on your first place win with this fantastically funny poem luv..

August 21, 2011 at 4:11 PM

hey Bob congrats and should this one come with a health and safety warning, ha ha David

August 21, 2011 at 3:49 PM

Hey Bob great job, Haaa! Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses

August 21, 2011 at 2:16 PM

Electrifying win, Robert! Great limerick indeed! The guy looked like Albert Einstein in a hurricane to me! Gwendolen

August 21, 2011 at 2:02 PM

nooooOOOOO! don't DO it! hehe, ya sparked the mom in me. Great write, Robert A. Congrats!

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