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Electic Comb

Gonna take my comb outa my pocket,
May as well kiss it goodby and hock it.
This is much less trying, 
although close to frying.
Just stick my tongue in the light socket.

Copyright © Robert A. Dufresne | Year Posted 2011

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Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/17/2011 9:06:00 PM That light socket might comb your hair for you! Fun and a chuckle, I love it. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/25/2011 8:20:00 PM Good one..That would be a great modern style..Got a chuckle..Sara Login to Reply

Richard Pickett Date: 8/25/2011 11:20:00 AM Male pattern, so it is called, Therefore my friend I won't call you bald, Keep the comb handy, because someday, You might just sport a new Toupee,....lol Love it my friend..and yes I am Backkkkk... I will be in touch...Love and God Bless...The Original Taz! BTW Brick may stop by.... Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 8/23/2011 9:08:00 PM congratulations on your win Robert! not an easy rhyme scheme, but you did it impressively and w/a great flow too. it matches the picture to a t :) Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/23/2011 12:32:00 PM I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/23/2011 12:47:00 AM oh, and I see from comments below that congats are in order too!! Yay for you!!! (I hope I can finally get time to see some winners' lists!!) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/23/2011 12:46:00 AM hahaha. Great ending!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/22/2011 3:43:00 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Robert Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/22/2011 3:35:00 PM Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Moses' "Boisterous Comedy" contest Robert. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Tony Lane Date: 8/22/2011 10:12:00 AM Great win. Good for you. Tony Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/22/2011 1:09:00 AM tou and your funny bone, robert..lol.. . heaps of cheers for the BIG-TIME win..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 8/22/2011 12:41:00 AM Had to laugh at this one my friend. Reminds me of the picture that prompted the Wolf Man. Great job. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/22/2011 12:25:00 AM Congratulations on your big win with your humorous poem. Joyce Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/21/2011 9:55:00 PM Congrats and lol!! Thanks for your comments on my work! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2011 4:59:00 PM hahaha. Fun one. and a big Congrats to you. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/21/2011 4:17:00 PM Congrats Robert on your first place win with this fantastically funny poem luv.. Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/21/2011 4:11:00 PM hey Bob congrats and should this one come with a health and safety warning, ha ha David Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/21/2011 3:49:00 PM Hey Bob great job, Haaa! Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 8/21/2011 2:16:00 PM Electrifying win, Robert! Great limerick indeed! The guy looked like Albert Einstein in a hurricane to me! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 8/21/2011 2:02:00 PM nooooOOOOO! don't DO it! hehe, ya sparked the mom in me. Great write, Robert A. Congrats! Login to Reply