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ELASTIC---acrostic

Elastic stretches bit by bit, around your thick dimension Lets you wiggle, if you're pudgy, from too much fudge retention A second portion...now, you're ecstatic....Alas, you've licked the kettle! Should I tattle or meddle much, or call for intervention? Thus, your middle may need attention, is it a time for fudge redemption? I hope you won't judge my good intentions, or hold a grudge.... OOPS! Caught by chance, I wear stretch pants!! Your fudge tastes quite fantastic!!
_________________________________________________ 9/24/13 For Andrea's "Seven" Contest

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Date: 10/9/2013 7:40:00 AM
Refreshing a bit of silly on a sunny morning! THANKS Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/8/2013 8:10:00 PM
very cool Carrie.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/8/2013 3:06:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your winning placement in the acrostic challenge contest! LOVE yours so much (I'm still wearing my maternity pants, sorry to say)Nicely done...Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/8/2013 11:16:00 AM
a wonderful win Carrie,, congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda
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Date: 10/6/2013 5:10:00 PM
You've licked it down to the last taste. It don't seem right, it all goes to your waste. But if we are a double dipper, we better be sure to have a strong zipper. Enjoyed and congrats. :)
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Date: 10/6/2013 2:29:00 PM
It's not a stretch to say that this is a funny poem...and deserving a good placement in the contest!
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:40:00 PM
this is too cute...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/5/2013 3:57:00 PM
Luvly poem...always nice to pull of an acrostic...thnks 4 visiting my page..
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Date: 10/5/2013 1:44:00 PM
A very funny and "sweet" poem, Carrie! This made me smile! :) Terrific work! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the great comments. They are truly appreciated!
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Date: 10/5/2013 12:06:00 AM
Yours took the CAKE for FUNNY. LOVED it, Carrie. BIG congrats on your number three win.
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:09:00 PM
Hahaha...enjoyed.
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Date: 9/25/2013 7:55:00 AM
HAHAH! Fudge & a glass of chocolate milk for me, please!!!! I am IN LOVE! =D Awesome laughs in this!
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:53:00 PM
Carrie I love it, just my sense of humour....Seren
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