El Dorado

for as much as anyone would care to admit,

it all seemed rather molesting.

the skies held dominion over the peeled

despot of sunset.

women young and old shirked in peasantry

kissed two of their fingers.


they pointed at the cross of Christ

as their fingers dragged over their

body to make the symbol in respect.

already 5 minutes late,the carriage

arrived as a beacon of a full moon.


Maidens and spinsters threw their

bodies toward the ground and

caressed his ankles in a desperate

grab of adoration.

in consideration he pulled away without

dismay.


without fanfare or ovation the carriage swaggered its

horse pulled frame through fogs cascade.

beneath the seat held a bottle of Brandy

stolen from a brothel in Paris.

it was easy for ones eyes to fixate on a lazy

wooden panel.....

etched in distressed lettering  the word

EL DORADO.


the name had a sinister charm and the evening

became and enchantress of daggers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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