El Amancer Del Mar

Important to note this the ACT of dawning in Spanish (know of no English equivalent)


Cape Hatteras


Joe the Moustache
   wiping the suds
& plays a black trombone while she
      (Joe has taken a player piano
and nickelodean
from his lapels)
       hurling now a nylon
and suddenly
slipped out of it all;
      Joe throws her a blue and giraffe skin
She blows a kiss
and lifting a thigh
   smiles and is gone

Joe into a head
blows himself
away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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La France Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Thomas, oh I really see the EE Cummings influence in this write, being an admirer of his style, I think it is quite wonderful 10 +
Walter Skyy Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 11:51 AM
Good afternoon. Your writing is very interesting. I hope you stop pass and take a look at some of my writing I thing you might enjoy Trances it's a re-writing of one of Poes writing. I hope to see you there.
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