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Ekphrasis On Haystacks At Giverny

coruscating cosmic colours
dazzling in the skyline~
prismatic geometric shapes
of village houses from afar 
dwarfed by enormous haystacks
a fiery cone resting 
illuminating in varied hues
reminds me of 
a mystic mountain ~
against  the luminous sky;
emanating silhouette 
resembling your shadow
as you gently fade away
the day you said,”goodbye”.


4 April 2021
For All Yours (April 5) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

Notes:
Haystacks is the common English title for a series of impressionist paintings by Claude Monet. The principal subject of each painting in the series is stacks of harvested wheat (or possibly barley or oats: the original French title, Les Meules à Giverny, simply means The Stacks at Giverny). The title refers primarily to a twenty-five canvas series which Monet began near the end of the summer of 1890 and continued through the following spring, though Monet also produced five earlier paintings using this same stack subject.(Photos and info credits to Wikipedia.)
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Calasibetta Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Monet would be proud. A beautiful poem, capturing the melancholy mood of "Haystacks". Congratulations on your win that is so deserved. Take Care, Paulette
Ibeh Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 4:13 AM
You're extremely adept at the Ekphrasis form. This is a great poem, JCB:-) Congratulations on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2021 at 3:48 PM
Love this. This is ekphrasis at its finest!
One Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 1:36 PM
This is brilliant and you did it so well..
Canerdy Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:37 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this superb descriptive piece--ending on a sad note, JCB. Janice
Ligon Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:22 AM
Great descriptions of the painting. I love the part about the shadow fading away as someone said goodbye- creative interpretation!
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