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For Bitesize Contest No107 sponsored by Line Gauthier

You'll hear no pop of a warmly burning fire, as shadows grow and living things retire, and the sun goes sinking low. The deafening silence only proves that anything that ever moved is frozen in the snow.

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Date: 3/19/2025 12:58:00 PM
Great lines, David!
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Date: 3/19/2025 11:52:00 AM
- The deafening silence... tangible, David - Great written :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/19/2025 12:45:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise! :-)

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