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Eight Sons

(These would include the younger brothers of Wounded Thunder, the character I made up in my previously posted poem). These were sons of Thunder Storm and “Flower,” from Wounded Thunder down to Thunder Bolt. “Bolt” was fast; the touchy one was “Shower.” And Thunder Struck was somewhat of a dolt. The cute one pampered by fair Prairie Flower well-deserved his name of Thunder Squall, and like another brother Thunder Shower, got teased, but even louder did he bawl! Both “Squall” and “Shower” vexed their brother “Cloud,” for Thunder Cloud by moodiness was led and always scowled at them for crying out loud! Great Thunder Head filled everyone with dread, but the wild son who proved the biggest sap came home infected. That was Thunder Clap!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/14/2016 12:13:00 PM
A very good poem, Andrea. Very clever use of words, I might add. You have such a vast selection of poems, I just randomly pick one from time to time. I picked this one because of the title. I come from a big family. I have thirteen brothers/sisters. "Eight Sons" grabbed my attention. I really liked how you write poems, you are very talented. Ty for sharing w/us your wonderful gift. Much love, RW (Romantic Warrior.)
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Date: 11/15/2013 7:22:00 PM
I agree with harry here.You are taking sonnets to a diffetent level!Enjoyed this very much Andrea.
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Date: 11/8/2013 2:29:00 AM
Wow! That's sound's awesome dearie,soo deep and a wonderful flow. Thanks so much for ur nice comments on my works! Love and hugs, Bob- Based On Belief
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:59:00 AM
This is good Andrea. I didn't read the other one, but I will. I enjoyed this very much. It was different. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:26:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle about the poor chap with the clap : )
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Date: 11/3/2013 8:52:00 AM
Great fun! I am ready for more tales of the Thunder family.
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Date: 11/2/2013 10:01:00 PM
This is a very vivid write nicely done, and thank you for your comments on my poetry.
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:40:00 PM
That last line is a zinger...nice write...hugs
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Date: 11/2/2013 5:42:00 PM
Oh am i glad to read this,, you are taking sonnets to a different level,, this is amazingly funny, and so clever....
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:31:00 PM
Wow, this is an incredibly witty and well thought out poem. You have outdone yourself with this one. This one goes in my favorites. The two sons I loved the best were thunderstruck the dolt (I could just visualize his mind being fried by lightening). My other favorite Thunder Clap with an STD. Bravo! Great write.
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:12:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful with the lovely scanning of Thunder with its entire family of eight sons. You have weaved it very nicely in your sweet write Andrea. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 11/2/2013 10:20:00 AM
Andrea, sons of thunder storm and flower was an excellent work. great poem. (: ) Jenish.
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:54:00 AM
I don't know how you feel thing things wonderfully. Genius always. Beautifully done. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 11/2/2013 5:18:00 AM
So this is another very interesting & entertaining poem which delighted me so much this afternoon my dear friend Andrea. An excellent write indeed giving me more smiles:))). Thank you so much for sharing! Have a blessed and grace-filled day always! love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 11/2/2013 2:53:00 AM
Hehe : ) a sunny clap for you..A different style than your usual but Im loving it..Parapapa.The maltese sky heard you sweet lady..The thunder brothers are all here this morn..At last changing of weather.Can r wait till I fill my wardrobe with Winter Clothes.Pls do send me your home address through email once again if you pls..Im thinking of writing Christmas cards earlier this time : )hugs
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Date: 11/1/2013 11:35:00 PM
wow Andrea,I felt as if I just walked into the 60's..(not an orgy) .lol...JK... i like it very catchy and entertaining.... and the ending had me laughing... can't believe you took it there.... love it.... SOUP Mail......
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Date: 11/1/2013 10:30:00 PM
A round of applause then washing my hands, just in case lol. you're on a roll with here, what about the eight daughters next haha. Very funny Petal, enjoyed that. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:35:00 PM
I'm almost dizzy with all this "thundering" going on...how funny and delightful. BG
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:57:00 PM
Wow Andrea, you have completed an awesome compilation of the Thunder brothers, a very enlightening sequel to your other delightful Thunder poem! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this lovely poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/1/2013 8:55:00 PM
lol....a cute continuation of your previous poem...enjoyed reading this witty poem tonight....hugs :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:32:00 PM
Hahah he he he haha...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) thanks Andrea
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:48:00 PM
OMG Andie Thunder Clap geeeeeez!! LMAOFOTF Yup, yup we can be tricky too LOL [oh yeah I real tricky!] L & L
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:36:00 PM
Clever and funny...there are not many comic sonnets, and it is refreshing to see one from you....
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:17:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle at the end..Enjoyed reading about Thunder Storm and Flower's children..Thanks for stopping by my work about the man who donned a yellow rainslicker..Of course as it said in the poem it was my husband..We have three Pomegrante Bushes and only two pomegrante fruit from the three bushes this year..He brought them to me..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:22:00 PM
That was okay..Sara

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