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"When thoughts cease to flow, where does ego go" Unseeking Seeker Can Ego escape its demise if it hides? In mind's chimeric forest it abides. It can wear a transparent look at times, to entice Mind's oft-changing designs. It might think to enter an empty mind of concepts echoing when left behind. But, not allowed, where its ego must dwell. Our Ego's meeting its own type of hell. Mind, ID and Ego, the three contradict the others' views, creating their conflict. Yet, in the end, it is mind that commands, altho ID and Ego will make their last stands. Ego: What are you sans me to add spice? ID: Remember me, I'm the one who's nice. If mind disappears, both also must go. Loss will extinguish Ego's torrid glow. May 14, 2022 for: Bubble of Illusion contest by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/18/2022 9:02:00 PM
This is an excellent portrayal of juggling complex concepts and terminology. Let's hope "mind" never goes....though at my age...it seems a possibility. Very nice!
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:58:00 PM
Wow. Such a complex topic! All I can say is: 'Don't mind me.' ~ Smiles for miles, Gershon
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Date: 5/17/2022 3:05:00 PM
This was super - really enjoyed it. Judging is going to involve reading some pretty interesting poems on this one!
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Date: 5/16/2022 3:46:00 PM
This asks so many compelling questions - are we our ego, if so, is that a blessing or curse, or both? Very profound, best wishes for the contest, Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/17/2022 2:41:00 PM
Exactly. We're still asking questions early Greeks couldn't answer. So many philosophies say lose the Ego, yet sometimes we really need it. Seeker asks hard questions :)
Date: 5/16/2022 10:46:00 AM
I think you studied psychology. I remember all these words from college but forgot how it all goes together. GREAT job here.
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/16/2022 3:38:00 PM
I did take some psych classes but mostly dull business. I actually googled those terms to remind myself. I think that poem goes nowhere :)
Date: 5/15/2022 12:00:00 PM
Enjoyed, but what happened to that Wizard of Id? Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 5/15/2022 2:52:00 PM
HaHa! Yeah, now that you mention it! And, I have no idea what Seeker wants, but probably not what I wrote. Aloha!

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