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Eggs-Acting Revenge Part 2

Shh-aaah....shh-aah, Oh how never ending is the sea..' I thought I should come down here Maybe it will help my insight into this terrible event??...Oh I don't know..' you just can't work things/people out it seems, I have found out some strange and sad (though) wheew..' there are some crazy ideas and thoughts going on round here, craazy..' indeed I wonder how people get such outlandish ideas?? I must have checked out near a thousand of those 'computer things' and I more confused than ever. Look who would want to kill off a nursery rhyme character?? (answer) I am not sure who egg sactly...quite a few I think could looking at some of those writes though.. ( strange things humans ) Hold on..! what's that I see?? Oh I'd better wade out quickly..! splash..! gloop splish..Gotcha..' steady now..! wheew...' you're heavy slither.... drag...humph..! There. cmo'n let go of it, grunt..pull flop,,' Ohh! (shake)))) com'n kitty..shaky shaky shaky...poor old thing he looks exausted ohh ohh he's coming round..yes yes)) no no you don't need that old bottle now Tom..I reck'on It saved your life though, you were out there how long?? weeks..' OH my OH my..' how did it happen? you think you weren't wanted anymore..out lived your usefulness, well there are some wicked people out there and no mistake..' here just lie back on that sand dune a moment..' so they tried to kill you off,,' say don't I know you from somewhere?? didn't you live in Cheshire for a long time..' yes yes and you were in puss in boots as well' gee your'e a great character..' OH me..' yes well I used to be ' the Humpty-Dumpty' but we were pushed off a wall..' yes yes, I was shocked when it happened here, as well..' hey but its good to meet another nursery rhyme character here, I don't feel so isolated now even though I'm just ghost of myself... Anyway puss, start at the start and tell me your story. and don't cry there's a good fellow..' you lost a fiddle.. It was a special one..? ohh your friend gave it to you.. I see.' I am sure it will turn up; you think it might be on a boat...slow down now you dear old thing... and what boat was that..? oh the pea green boat...' yes yes, everyone has heard of the pea green boat dear puss-cat.. say I have had a thought, we are both nursery rhyme characters I was killed and I looks like they tried to murder you too... so you must have been pushed then? you are not sure.. you remember lots of waves..' you think it was because of who you were, I don't know.. I really don't..' look puss, I'll tell you what.. you are safe here with me now, why don't we both have a good sleep and see how things look in the morning..? yes..' you're O K with that? all right then, goodnight now..' till tomorrow..!

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Date: 10/17/2015 8:42:00 PM
Another great write , my granddaughter Londyn thinks so too :) I wrote one called Hollow Bones, the last three lines she wrote :)
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Date: 3/1/2014 11:01:00 PM
Reminds of refuge in friendship Joe, very thought provoking. J.A.B.
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Date: 3/1/2014 7:38:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing all the neat references to the nursery rhymes, Joe. this one is a bit over my head if you were making metaphors in it. Glad to see you inspired to be writing!
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Date: 3/1/2014 4:12:00 PM
Interesting way to go with Nursery Rhymes..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/1/2014 8:48:00 AM
I'm getting a chuckle out of trying to view a scrambled egg ghost. Yes, put him in the pea green boat. Let his roundness overlap its sides. Love, daver.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 3/1/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Daver, I kid you not ole Dumpty is really mad..' you will be seeing more of his thoughts and remonstrations he is on a real journey here, and now he has met the cat, he is protective and suspicious.! I hope you enjoy his future exploits..'
Date: 2/27/2014 2:30:00 PM
lol, enjoyed these two pieces, Joe : )
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