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Eggs

morning scrambled eggs cracked into a clear glass bowl... translucence reflects

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 8/30/2012 7:35:00 AM

WHOA!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/16/2012 12:09:00 PM

Eggs are great in the morning, but I can't have them every day because of the cholesterol. Nice way to describe them in a haiku poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2012 7:50:00 PM

NICE one!! I love eggs in the morning but rarely have them.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/11/2012 9:06:00 PM

This is a perfect way to make scrambled eggs, once they are in the bowl, scramble them, then fry them! Of course you should look at their beauty in the bowl...honestly, that is what I would do before I scrambled them! Their beauty would be translucent, a gorgeous effect! Great observation, never thought of writing about this before, clever little poem my friend! Great Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/11/2012 1:31:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend - I'm feeling hungry now, lol

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/11/2012 12:19:00 PM

Was this written the morning Sara?? makes me think of cakes to bake."

Bl Devnath

Date: 8/11/2012 11:54:00 AM

Nice comparison of reflection with wonderful expression. Loved your poem. Always, bl

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/11/2012 11:09:00 AM

nice,sprinkle a little salt n pepper

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/11/2012 8:31:00 AM

Now Im hungry for breakfast..lol. god images Sara....hugs Michael

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/11/2012 8:24:00 AM

For some reason I'm craving scrambled eggs now and I think it's your fault, Sara!...Great observation and description of a captured moment in time - Tim