Sharon Ruebel Poet Rhyme

Egg Shells

No more walking on egg shells
or stroking one mans pride

My wounded heart is open now
and at last so are my eyes

No more empty conversations
pro claiming he's the best

If truth be known his actions shown
He's just like all the rest

There is so much to be thankful for
I'm healing from the fall

But he's the one who's suffering
He could have had it all...

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Jon A Cavanaugh November 25, 2012 at 6:22 AM Another great write. And this is only the 3rd poem of yours that I have read. I sincerely hope that you will start writing again. You are so talented.

Poet Destroyer A November 23, 2010 at 1:17 PM it's funny how one way or another we think we have to walk on egg shells.. I did it for my x-hubby for years,,, than i had enough,, and he has nothing like before,, so you are so right Sharon.. enjoyed your poem,.p.d.

Doris Culverhouse November 1, 2010 at 10:18 AM congrats on your featured poem!!

Carol Sunshine Brown November 1, 2010 at 9:59 AM Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Shar. Love, Carol

Joy Wellington October 31, 2010 at 10:28 PM Sharon, this went to my Favs. Some of us just don't know when we have it all. Congrats on being featured. Joy (Jew)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 31, 2010 at 8:29 PM Congrats Sharon on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..

James Fraser October 31, 2010 at 9:44 AM Shoot from the hip girl, and maybe the next guy will walk on egg shells >> James :)

Carol Sunshine Brown October 28, 2010 at 3:53 PM I must say there are some exceptional poems being posted today. Glad yours was included in my reading this afternoon Shar. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse October 28, 2010 at 3:45 PM I love it!!! Hoo ray! do or die! keep your chin up and watch for those runny eggs.

Francine Roberts October 28, 2010 at 11:27 AM Oh I love it , you go girl, can definitely relate to this one, straight to my favourites it goes

James Peranteau October 28, 2010 at 10:16 AM Great write Sharon...and you hang in the girlie ! By the by....this man is distant from the rest ! Much love, james

Donna Howerton October 28, 2010 at 10:10 AM I like your poem very much.