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For 1472 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

 

Egg and Potato: A Love Story

The potato, to the egg, he cooed,
"You are by far my favorite food",
and he continued as he said, 
"Might you and I soon be wed?"

The egg, to the potato, spoke,
"My, but you're a handsome bloke.
Our shapes are very much the same,
and I, with love, will take your name."

To seal the deal, they sweetly kissed,
and drew up an invitation list
(so their best friends would not be missed).
Little envelopes were addressed to these:
peppers, mushrooms, onions, cheese.

A happier occasion was never known,
how beautiful was egg in her silken gown,
the proud potato fried golden brown,
a party well-remembered, though
it was washed down with my morning joe.
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Wolf Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 8:26 PM
Romeo and Juliet have nothing on Egg and Potato! Love it, David. ~ gw
Crandall Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 11:05 AM
haha, thanks Gershon, right up there with the great love stories!
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:56 PM
So are you familiar with Spanish omelettes. They were my favorite food in Spain. I make them now myself but I Americanize them with onions and cheese. I adore your foodie poems. Another fave
Crandall Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 8:26 PM
Thanks, Andrea! Yep, I think I've had Spanish omelettes in restaurants, years ago. Now, I was just thinking of all the things I like with eggs and potatos.
Greenhough Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 10:07 PM
I liked the unhappy ending. It was a good start to the day.
Crandall Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 6:38 AM
Haha, yep, I guess, in this case, happiness is a matter of perspective - whose perspective!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 6:45 PM
Mmm, now I'm hungry! A match made in para diced!
Crandall Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 6:39 AM
Haha, breakfast time here!
Crandall Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 6:38 AM
Haha, breakfast time here!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 5:55 PM
Egg and potato went together well, a beautiful coupling that went down swell… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 6:08 PM
haha, you said it so concisely!
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