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EFFUSED ENCOUNTER

EFFUSED ENCOUNTER Neither a dream nor a trick, I beguiled-- I reach the sky enameled with golden smile. To hurdle bumps and curves, I continue to pedal this steadfast being yearn to step on a pedestal, I found at the center of a fertile square mile. Train piercing thorns didn't blind eyes to behold, a sunrise stored to each and every intricate fold. Some jasmine fragrance afloat-- satiates my smell lost hope resurrect to impregnate a lifetime tale as fragile attached hearts trying to enfold, The autumn trumpet hues a runner-up palette to your summer vibrant colors ballet, eyes wander feast on your swells of panache. My fingers drown to trace river edges bends, posh-- enthralled, above moon bowed shedding candle sprays. Open secret scents, you effused stirred plague of souls, the tempted sirens in one sang a victor goal. The listening wind hush and blows the beats swaying leaves to dance in left to right fleet. Catalyzed by the sun rising daily at morn call, I am inspired to traverse every norms' womb. By your petals slow zoom, I find myself in chorus bloom. Rooms of my mind open to hundred ocean thoughts which soon aims to recite it's symphonic notes, I... compelled to nectar strings of burst abloom. Goodness! War and peace didn't wilt our affair eversince Zion answered every whispered prayer. My experiences with you are pearls, dearest flower, consent me then to carry and share them 'til forever, as here on garden earth, I meet you as my soul pair. © 4:44 am; November 25, 2014 ___________________________________________________ -------------------------------------------------------------------- No cross. No trial. Not even a dark storm will stop me to climb the highest mountain if there-- a sublime beauty awaits for me.From tattered highways to plain narrow roads, I will stroll alike-- a fearless lion roaring regal With sunbeams glowing ember above my head, I behold an Aphrodite dwelling beneath a labyrinth fold. Perfumed fragrance rides the swaying breeze-- luring my hunger to taste some love. I, like the Aurora, rise in wonder. Oh! This sojourner's sight is arrested to your splendor. In a blue skied ambiance, will you care to surrender? The autumn leaves are like free-falling birds from maple-trees pretty,but a runner-up to summery hues you play. Big brown eyes meander feast on your petals of panache-- my fingers slowly prom to outline your edges. I, charmed, as even the mystique moon curves, casting some dim light sprays. . . Hours passed yonder am held captive by the spell from you Belle. so enthused, the reflections, I have zoom as I dispel castle dreams that draws a happily ever after tales. The apex now I reached - a diva I am as I sing rhapsodizing sweet the Nirvana I happened to see. I thank God that the world wars didn't bobble this encounter True... the years may ebb but this I will always remember. Dearest flower, my experience with you is priceless, consent me then to apportion this until forever in this Eden Earth that only you~ Belle is my soul pair. ________________________________________________________________ Sponsor Roy Jerden Contest Name The Makeover ---Placed 2nd--- ©O.E. Guillermo 7:28 pm; March 11, 2015 *** Note: the original in the form of quintella the new one in iambic heptameter or quatorzain.

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Date: 4/19/2015 2:01:00 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:28:00 PM
you did wonderful second time around Olive... Sweet win..Linda
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Date: 4/13/2015 7:50:00 PM
I'm a bit confused, I do like the second on better the language is clearer? Congrad's on your winning verse! Light & Love
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:58:00 PM
Ahhh so it's a Quintella this time!! I don't think there are many forms left for you to try out! I have never written one and have no idea what it requires, but apart from that the poem captivates with its alluring attraction and your lovely style of writing. #7 // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:54:00 PM
hahahaha am just trying and trying Paul, this only requires a rhyme form, a a b b a as one of it's type... no particular syllable count though i tried to make beat on this but I gave up cause I don;t like to sacrifice the thought as some of the words.. :) hahaha.. ;0
Date: 11/25/2014 2:02:00 PM
My comment echoes Brenda's. I so love the way you write, crafting your words into gems. So looking forward to your next poem, James :)x
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 8:37:00 AM
Thanks much.. :)! can't say much but thank you.. :)!
Date: 11/24/2014 8:24:00 PM
You are so good at what you do. I couldn't praise you enough for this beautiful Quintella Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda.. :) I appreciate it.. :)