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Effervescent echo

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Learning what life had to offer I came often, drank deep.. at the well with you, fresh as spring snow melt. Hear it echo - is it still life with you at the well.. with you at the well- is it still. In cup or quart or teaspoon sampled.. best in life, some sour too, hear it echo, is it true, surely so, surely so. Never sorry for memory of taste, so sweet and bubbly, oh nah dear- lemon cherry fizz don't even come close. Just wish I coulda stayed at the fountain drinking you in, effervescently refreshing you.. quinching my thirst, gosh what a taste.

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Date: 12/16/2023 6:02:00 PM
Thank you for a delightful poem. It described a very romantic picture.
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Date: 12/16/2023 10:25:00 AM
Richard this is so bittersweet. What a cool poem
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