Effervescence

A rainbow of flowers adorn her hair cascading an effervescence ~ to her being I feign fallen fast and drifting free in heartfelt fantasy night dawns as feeling fawns within the glow of the moon skies erupt   visions clear amongst the stars I swoon to her every hypnotic thrum ~ I awake gentle winds blow red campion dance seas remain a rare calm awash in her beauty reflections cast the way
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Sands Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Well written Tim. Many nice lines in this :)
Manassian Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:31 PM
So romantic, Tim...Very lovely. The imagery you created was thrilling here. Thanks for your visit to my tribute to Tim Ryerson. Much appreciated.
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Oh, to feel this type of love again! You are clearly taken with her, Tim, and describe her attributes beautifully. Hugs, Carolyn
Sathasivam Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:32 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Very romantic write. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful, romantic, Tim, enjoyed reading. hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 2:37 PM
- Sounds beautiful, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
George   Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Lovely musings, Tim
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