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Eek - a Squeak

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
I must protect my trunk
I’d give that squeaker such a clump
If I were grown and drunk

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
It gave me such a scare
Those tiny squeakers make me meek
Is there one under there

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
I quickly raised my feet
I did not dare to take a peek
Or beat a quick retreat

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
It’s messing with my brain
Every time I move a bit
It seems to squeak again

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
And now I need my dad
He rushed out when he heard the squeak 
The squeaking made him mad

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
And now it’s squeaking faster
My seat moved when I moved my feet
For each leg has a caster

I heard a squeak beneath my seat
It made my dad’s blood boil
But now he’s back and in his trunk
Is lubricating oil
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 12/17/2021 1:07:00 PM
It'll be 'oil over' for that squeak! lol. :)
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Date: 12/17/2021 10:30:00 AM
So his dad said, "Oil get to that"?
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/17/2021 11:32:00 AM
I suppose you think that’s punny? ;-)
Date: 12/17/2021 8:40:00 AM
Ha ha! This is very good. I was expecting there to be a mouse ...lol.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/17/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Natasha. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 12/17/2021 12:48:00 AM
Nothing worse than an annoying squeak Terry, wd 40 works wonders.. Tom
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/17/2021 11:41:00 AM
Except perhaps, an annoying pipsqueak, Tom. Yes, I sometimes have to call my internet provider. Terry
Date: 12/16/2021 6:49:00 PM
I love the rhyming, very funny....
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/17/2021 11:42:00 AM
Thanks, Debra. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 12/16/2021 6:00:00 PM
(chuckling) This is really cute, Terry. I was really beginning to wonder what was making that squeak. I'm so glad a little oil took care of it.
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Date: 12/17/2021 11:44:00 AM
Oops, I forgot to click on nursery rhyme. Hope you weren’t expecting vampire rats from hell. ;-). Thanks Milt. Terry
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