Edge of the War

today I was shopping
in a moment found spotless
a basket of groceries...
a list in my hand..
old music piped in
the lyrics forgotten
from a favorite rock band 

today I was shopping
when my thoughts interrupted
the reach of my hand
your face and your laughter
popped into my head

there on the shelf
in the jar of green olives,
in the crust of the bread
in the provolone cheese
a six pack of beer.. of pale summer blend
was your face staring back
that brought back the years
and the hot sting of tears

and out of the blue,
the moment once spotless
is swallowed again
by the ghost from before
in the aisle of the store
on a day I was shopping
on the edge of the war

I came out of the store
stepping into the blue
wondering who
I was, long before...
before there was you

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Open Poetry Contest: Finalized 7/19/15
Resubmitted for Laura Loo's Contest: 2nd Place Only III
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 2:54 AM
Superb write Carrie! Congrats on awesome win!
Nunez Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 1:50 PM
Such poignant write, Carrie. Congrats!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:14 AM
Carrie, you again pull my heartstrings.. love the recollection of moments... !beautiful!congrats!~Olive Eloisa
Lawless Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 5:29 AM
OH, Carrie, an eloquently perfect description of those moments, those flashbacks triggered by the commonplace movements of living.....filled with traces of the past.
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 3:44 AM
Ah! Carrie! Nostalgia at its very best! Touching, and beautiful! Congratulations on a very merited win. // paul
Wigley Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Great write, Carrie, I think we've all been there at some point, and you paint it so well. Congratulations, Viv x
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Konos Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 7:45 PM
This very old song applies, "It had to be you".....
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 6:10 PM
Carrie,, congratulations in Charlotte Puddifootst... SKAT
Puddifoot Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:54 PM
consistent quality from you, carrie, and of course you write these bittersweet, nostalgic types of poems so so well, wonderfully evocative - congrats on your win in my contest :)
Allison Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 2:39 PM
hauntingly beautiful Carrie many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 5:12 PM
Carrie, oh so sadly beautiful, you have such a talent 7 and thanks for visiting my pastel reflections
Parker Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 8:43 PM
sometimes the simplest things can open the gate to memories, usually they are the deepest memories..good luck in the contest
Konos Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Carrie "Mind Blowing" Richards!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Carrie, You have the most unique way of drawing readers into your work to have a feeling as if they were sharing your moment. I loved this entry! Hugs, Connie 7
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