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Ecstatic elevator


Bonfire branches 
swaying in summer 
dress 
At the riverside 
playing with the wind 
A long tress 


Snaking curves 
In the rippling river 
A summer spree 
Leaning lips 
through the vapour 
A cup of tea 

Sizzling heat 
ripening the mangoes 
Juicy delight 
Swimming feet
in the evening pond 
In the sky, a kite 

Rendezvous of 
eyes and tresses 
With the author 
Continues the 
cloud nine trip by an 
Ecstatic elevator
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July 4, 2025

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/4/2025 7:28:00 AM

Elevators always make me ecstatic, except when they break down. Yipe!

Tom Woody
Date: 7/6/2025 5:19:00 AM

Sounds fun

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2025 8:12:00 AM

Thanks for your encouraging comment. This elevator is too strong to break down! Ride it and swing in ecstasy.