Ecstasy

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                             September 8, 2025, entered in Rob Carmack's Drug Contest

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Eve and Aiden, both 16, gave in to temptation to try the "hug drug."
Cuddling and kissing ceased when she succumbed to the drug,
Suffering an unusually bizarre reaction--just shy of death.
Two weeks later, unharmed by the drug but guilt-ridden,
Aiden sat by her hospital bed staring at the murmuring machines,
Silently praying for her recovery and for forgiveness. Eve and Aiden--
Young virgins who took a foolhardy risk to satisfy curiosity!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/30/2016 11:17:00 PM
Janice, very creative ... best of luck in contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/1/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance! Janice
Date: 6/30/2016 6:14:00 AM
Very effective and significant piece. I hope it places high so that many people will get to read this one.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/30/2016 9:25:00 AM
Richard, this is SO encouraging. Thank you! Janice
Date: 6/29/2016 7:57:00 PM
Really good analogy in your creative poem about the drug ecstasy Janice! Good luck in the contest!:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/29/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cheryl. Janice
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